07/09/2011 06:10 am
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Spike's agitation is palpable, as is Dawn's. Everyone's nicely in character, though Giles is beginning to see the light. Again, nicely written.
Spike's agitation is palpable, as is Dawn's. Everyone's nicely in character, though Giles is beginning to see the light. Again, nicely written.
Muchas gracias!
Behind Blue Eyes
03/20/2011 07:56 pm
This chapter held you on the edge of anticipation, but at the same time moved along beautifully.
03/13/2011 05:13 pm
Great pacing of events in this chapter. My only complaint is the placement of the amulet. A forearm can easily be cut off in battle. Why not the tried and true around the neck hidden beneath clothes method? Mundane but practical.
ascii27
03/07/2011 03:30 am
More! More! must have more. What a terrible place to stop. Please write more soon.
And thank you.
And thank you.
<insert evil author laughter here, buahahaha>
Don't worry, more coming soon!
Don't worry, more coming soon!
03/07/2011 12:23 am
Great update. These demons sound like pretty nasty buggers. Hope Spike finds her in time.
03/06/2011 11:09 pm
I wonder how time compares between the two dimensions? How long has it been for poor Buffy? Hope Spike finds her withut losing his bus token...
Can't wait...
Can't wait...
03/06/2011 09:58 pm
Yuck. I hope Spike gets there in time.