Running from the Inevitable by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter eightteen

babyblues
03/10/2011 02:22 pm

hehehe. i giggled at the little 'sugar and Spike' instead of 'sugar and spice' :) i thought it was quite clever

and Spike after suagr and coffee?... exactly like what im like, constantly hypo and doing shit that embarasses everone around me :D

I'mm sooooooooo pumped for the next chapter, so dont take too loong, kay?
xxx

*grins* How observant of you, kind lady. ;) I love that you noticed this not-so-deliberate play of words. Spike is spicy, isn't he? So I thought it would fit. ;)

Haha, now, I'd love to see that! Must be fun to be around you when you're on sugar high. lol Hyper Spike was definitely lot of fun to read so I'm happy you liked it!

Never! *g* I wouldn't make you wait too long, gorgeous. Thank you for delighting me!!! :D

Sarah
03/09/2011 09:15 am

BLOODY HELL!! That chapter completely knocked my socks off!! Plus another piece of clothing which we won't go into!! ") Thank you for giving my pent up frustrations a bit of relief! (Although, I am looking forward to the final BIG BANG!!!)

The first section had me in stitches with Spike on his sugar high, and drawing Buffy's breasts in the salt? That was absolutely priceless!! I can just see him doing something so juvenile!! And oh, poutty!! I could've just nibbled on his bottom lip when he tried to justify himself by saying "But they’re your boobs". Also liked him trying to convince her to give him a free show! That vamp never gives up trying!! :)

Putting a hand down Spike's front pants pocket! Can I join in? I can just see Buffy blushing a violent shade of crimson at this point! Also liked Spike trying to run out without paying the bill and Buffy grabbing a hold of his shirt! :) Got to admire a bloke for trying! Favourite line in this bit, definitely the “Strikes fear right into my unbeating heart."

Damn that makeout scene was hot!! Your descriptions are absolutely brilliant in these scenes! I totally love them!! They get me all hot and bothered!! And Buffy finally got to put her hands on his tight butt!! Bet her heart was beating a regular tango! And, argh!! Another interruption!! Spike should've just eaten that guy that started whining about his car! I mean come on!! A bit of understanding please!!

Buffy trying to keep her wits about her was just adorable!! I especially liked that line “But we only… to get the stuff.” Give it up Buffy (pun definitely intended!!), forget about trying to maintain your good-girl façade and have some fun!!

Spike breaking the lock to get into the motel room?! Oh, Rhett Butler moment!! ")  And then ravishing her against the door! My blood was boiling and steam was coming out of my ears very quickly! I was with Buffy completely with begging Spike and holding on to him as hard as possible! I think I came at the same time she did! Mind you I don't think my computer mouse with ever be the same again!! And then having Spike sucking his fingers - are you trying to kill me?

(P.S. Further to my reference to Rhett Butler, if you've ever seen Gone With The Wind, don't you think the relationship between Buffy and Spike is very much like that of Scarlett and Rhett? She's infatuated with her "first love" who isn't at all what he seems (Ashley/Angel) and he's an arrogant arse that loves her (although he won't admit it at first) and has to watch her be involved with three other guys. And then to crown it all she only realises she loves him when it's too late - Spike goes up in the Hellmouth and Rhett leaves with that lovely line "frankly my dear, I don't give a damn". - mind you, the authoress of GWTW said in her book about the story that she believes "she (Scarlett) gets him in the end" which gives me hope that Buffy eventually will get Spike too!! :)

Nice way to finish the chapter off! A little light-hearted humour at Spike's expense. You got Buffy and us off, let's just leave Spike hanging for a little while!! ") Poor Spike, I can totally understand his desperate "oh, come on!".

Well done on a simply fantastic chapter! I would certainly switch places with Buffy in heartbeat to enjoy everything Spike did to her in this one!! I eagerly await the next chapter to see whether they will stay that extra night and get in some rather intense moments or whether you're going to torture us a little bit more and make them leave!

LOL! I absolutely love the use of expletive. ;) Definitely cracked me up! And yay for me knocking off articles of your clothes and just with my words. Now that’s what I call being crafty. ;) I’m immensely proud of myself, especially as I don’t consider myself as good in writing smutty parts.
 
Hee… he’s one naughty artist, isn’t he? And juvenile is just the right word to describe his antics. ;) He’s hyper enough without the aid of sugar high and caffeine so this was definitely to be expected. Poor Buffy, having her boobs exposed in a public restaurant’s table. *g* That was Spike’s way of saying he wanted to see her boobs again. Nope, he just doesn’t give up.
 
Oh yeah, can I join in too? I’d let my hands wander though just because I couldn’t help myself, people being able to see be damned. :D Hee… glad you liked the fact Spike tried to run out without paying! Buffy would have killed him if he did that to her. Lol
 
*blushes* Why, thank you, kind milady. I certainly did enjoy writing it and nothing makes me happier than to know I did a good job of it. :) Your praise always makes my heart melt! And now you’re speaking of tight butts and all I can think about is Spike’s ass begging to be squeezed. Damn you for putting naughty images in my brain! *g* Spike didn’t care they got caught, he totally would have continued the make out session, spectators be damned. And if the guy complained, he would have just bitten him. Silly Buffy for getting so easily embarrassed.
 
Haha, give it up indeed! Her virtue is definitely being threatened by the irresistible vampire and not even Buffy can’t keep fighting her primal urges. We’ll see how long it takes for them to seal the deal. ;)
 
LMAO! You’re so awesome!! :D I absolutely love that you found this chapter so hot your computer mouse has been scarred for life! *gg* Spike getting all frisky does that effect on every woman, I think. Any sexy scene with him in it definitely never fails to get me hot. ;)
 
Oh, I haven’t seen the movie but I did read the book though it was a pretty long time ago. I definitely agree with you there. It does resemble the damn triangle between Buffy/Angel/Spike, doesn’t it? It wouldn’t have occurred to me if you hadn’t pointed it out! What a great observation. I wonder if Joss was influenced by this old time classic. ;) Though when it comes to canon and the comics in particular I’ve lost all hope for Buffy and Spike ever ending up together. Don’t think Joss can actually let someone be happy long-term nor he can afford to have Buffy finally choose between Angel and Spike- that would cost him the shippers of the other pairing. *sigh* Gotta love the fanfic world- we always get a happy ending for our duo there. :)
 
Hee… I do aim to please. ;) God bless his poor blue balls, but Spike can take it. Being with Buffy is a reward enough.
 
Oh yeah, as would I. *g* And I’m not going to spoil anything for you, so all I can tell you is that things between them will progress both emotionally and physically from this point on. Thank you so much for the delightful review!!! :D

Natalie
03/09/2011 03:54 am
Ahhhhhhh! So good! This chapter is soooo teasing! Poor Spike just can't catch a break. Love the story and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Yaaay! I LOVE hearing that. :D And what can I say? I just enjoy teasing both Spike and you, kind readers. ;) Now worries though, Spike will be rewarded for being patient even if he's ready to explode. *g* There shall be more soon. Thank you for the sweet review!!! :D