The Bloodshedverse :: Spuffy with Bite

Running from the Inevitable by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter twenty-eight

Sarah

04/10/2011 04:35 am

GAH!! This was - Spike inside - bedbreaking.....oh all right, you rendered me incoherent and I'm now a gibbering mess!!! :)

This chapter more than delivered on all that builtup UST and definitely showed what Buffy and Spike's first time should have been like (not that horrendous, yet hot moment on the show!!). And six hours?! I think my brain is fried just thinking about it!! ")

I loved Spike's reaction at the start of the chapter! He certainly got straight to the big moment didn't he!! :) I don't blame Buffy for not being disappointed that there wasn't anymore foreplay - afterall the girl finally got what she wanted didn't she!! ") And Spike's reaction when he realised what he had done? Completely adorable and makes me want to kiss him senseless!! :)

"Just staying inside her without moving surpassed anything he’d thought was the best moment of his existence." And this explains his rather crude comment of "the only thing better than killing a slayer is -" (making love to one!).

"Making love to her for hours until they both lay on her girly bed exhausted and spent sounded bloody brilliant right now." Oh boy, just the thought of this had me gasping for breath!!! Definitely having Spike as your boyfriend would have you burning off a lot of calories!! Good way to keep fit!! ")

"Wanna be on top?" - Now there's a man that knows how to be generous in bed and takes his girl's needs into consideration!! Buffy's reaction and her resulting enjoyment was great fun to read!! And I'm right there with her observation of "She’d just found a funner way to spend her free time."

"But apparently, Spike was nowhere near done with her and she let out a surprised squeak when he banded his arms around her back and started to gently thrust up into her." - He really is the energizer bunny in bed isn't he? He just keeps going and going and going and...... Buffy is certainly going to be one happy and satisfied slayer from now on!!! :)

"His body was a comforting presence rather than a stifling burden, his height just perfect for her to tease his lips with hers." I absolutely loved this description!! They really do fit together perfectly and their bodies do compliment the other to the point where they are like two pieces of a puzzle coming together!!

"Why did you stop?" - I was certainly right there with Buffy at this moment!! How dare he put an end to such a marvellous time!! And to that ridiculous comment of "Just giving you a breather" can I say "pfft, who wants or needs a breather with you around, just keep on going until we're both exhausted to the point of being incapable of movement!!" Good on Buffy for taking control!! ") And then it was back to happy land for everyone!!

I certainly don't blame Buffy for going cross-eyed!! I believe I did the same thing at just imagining what Spike was doing!! :) And then I think I stopped breathing altogether when he "set a pace that left the headboard rattling against the wall in a staccato of thuds." Spike-loving, there's nothing like it!! And thank goodness Joyce wasn't home!!

"Then she felt him harden within her walls and her jaw dropped open. “Seriously? Again? And so soon?”" - Buffy's innocent reaction was gorgeous and definitely makes you think Angel mustn't have a great deal of stamina if going at it three times is enough to surprise her.

Hours of having Spike's luscious self next to me in my bed!! I definitely agree to Buffy's "Swoonage, how nice to meet you."

"The bed was broken." - I positively cracked up at this line!! And Spike's smug satisfaction was simply hysterical to read!! I can also understand Buffy's giggling reaction and then continuing "to ride him into the ground." That girl has her priorities right!! Who cares about a broken bed when you have a naked Spike beneath you!! ")

"She’d pushed him to his limits when it came to vampire stamina." - Woo hoo!! You go girl!!! Six hours of naked fun and games (and I can only imagine the different things Spike taught her!!) :)

"The bloody birds had been chirping so loud he wanted to maim them before the feathery bastards woke his girl." - This line once again reveals the adorableness that is Spike!! Not even the birds are allowed to upset his girl!! :) And that last line where he kisses her and then tucks "a comforter around her to keep her warm" simply had my heart turning to mushy goo!! Oh to have a boyfriend like Spike, I would be one happy girl!!! :)

You have fulfilled every naughty thought you've placed in my mind throughout this story and so I thank you most sincerely for the wonderful time I've had so far and I definitely look forward to the next instalment (where hopefully we'll get to see Buffy have a lovely morning after with many delicious Spike loving moments!!) ")

LMAO! I can see that. ;) That makes me feel strangely proud.

I’m so happy to hear that! I wrote and rewrote this chapter so many times because I wanted it to be just right. So it’s good to know you weren’t disappointed. :) And six hours indeed. That’s what you get when a vampire and a slayer finally get to do the deed. ;)

Spike was thrown for a loop with Buffy’s confession and he lost his head a bit there. But Buffy sure didn’t mind. ;) Hee… I bet you’d like to kiss him senseless. Who wouldn’t?

Haha… nice save there. ;) I certainly prefer your version of how that sentence would end than Spike’s. He sure has that foot in the mouth disease, doesn’t he?

You wouldn’t even need to a gym if you had him for a boyfriend. He’d sure keep you busy with ‘exercising’. ;)

Right? Man that can relinquish control is a man worth keeping, IMO. And showing Buffy just how nice it can feel earned him many points in her book. ;) She’ll have trouble getting out of that bed now. Lol

Yup, with Spike it just goes on and on and on… No more mopey bitchy Buffy!

I’m glad you agree! Andyou know, I can’t really imagine just how awkward would be having sex with someone who’s two heads taller than you (like Buffy and Riley). I mean seriously, she’d be left staring at his chest all the time. With Spike, she just has to lean in a bit to be able to kiss him. So much nicer, IMO. :)

Haha… it was more like HE needed the breather but that wouldn’t be very many to admit, now would it? ;)

Spike/Buffy loving sure is prone to leave some holes in the wall. Lol Not to mention, they killed the bed. How embarrassing would that be, if Joyce caught them. *g*

I bet Spike could beat Angelus stamina-wise any day. ;) Besides no pesky losing-my-soul interruptions.

Now, how nice would that be?? *drools*

Haha… I thought you might. ;) Of course he’d be proud of doing her bed in, the smug vampire. Not that Buffy minded too much, she was too involved in what she was doing at the moment to pay the bed much attention. Lol

Oh yeah, he definitely did teach her many things. But we know that even six hours couldn’t quench his thirst for her body. But she did exhaust him physically, good for her! :D

Yup, he’s just that nice mix of sexy fiend and attentive boyfriend. Buffy’s comfort is always at the forefront of his mind. :) I think he would have been that way on the show, had Buffy let him. But she had to go and treat him like he had no feelings. Not that Spike was faultless because he sure wasn’t. *sigh* So much angst in S6, good thing we have fan fics. :)

That is absolutely awesome to hear!! I’m very happy you weren’t disappointed with this chapter. There’s just one more coming and that’s it. But it will be twice as long as usual. Hoep you’ll like it. Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D