05/16/2012 09:45 am
Great line: "This was a deal with the devil, and she knew it." Excellent read so far. It feels like an episode unfolding. Good pacing & characterizations & the descriptions are so eerie & detailed that I'm sucked right into the world you're creating. One of the better written fics I've seen, publishing quality for sure. Nice job :)
05/09/2011 02:11 am
Hey - I'm dying to know what Spike's "collecting" in the car!
I'm thinking neither one of them should go to sleep - how do they know they would wake up again? Also, is Faith in a Double Coma?
Nice writing, Knife and a great story.
05/05/2011 12:24 am
this story is really creepy - thinking about the idea of being in my town with everything in it asleep...
Buffy is Cinderella! :)
I cna't wait to see what's in the trunk.
love the interaction.
More!
05/05/2011 12:09 am
great continuation - Buffy would want that make-up done! I like the interaction between Buffy and Spike, the snarkiness, the underlying tension.