First I want to clarifyabout saying I wanted a cutscene, that wasn't what I meant.  The quick flash was enough, I think I just wanted a quick description of the event.

  I dug this story a bunch for the pure outlandishness, as well as the subtext of everybody's personal curses.  That was just an enjoyable, easy read.

Lots to love here.  Humour, action and Spuffiness.  I agree, the Sins fit the characters very well.

Beautiful story; loved how it ended. I also like that you didn't make Giles completely unaware that "something" was going on.

You did a great job with the requirements - with the exception of Tara and Dawn, all the sins fit the characters perfectly.   Even with the other two you did a fine job with how you used their sin.  I have enjoyed reading your work over the last few days. 

You did an amazing job with this story!  It was a pleasure to read from the beginning to the end.  Brava!

Thank you for stepping up to the plate and taking on this challenge.  What an enjoyable reading and food for thought  experience!

Very tidy ending - although I really would have liked to see Xander's reaction to Spuffy... ;-)

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Well done!  You met the challenge well, using humor and good characterizations.

I think this was a very good way of ending/starting the relationship between Buffy and Spike.  I think it would have been out of character (as this story went) for Buffy to sudenly declare undying love for Spike when they clearly have a lot to work through.  very good story - enjoyed it throughout!    

Had 5 chapters to catch up on - every one of them excellent, I loved this story. Each sin described to a tee each scooby, and the explanation and ending were perfect. Great writing, hope you have some fics/ideas in that brilliant mind of yours.