Destroying Entropy by BuffyMeetsSpike
Chapter: Chapter 1

08/26/2011 01:42 am
Oh boy, this one is gonna be a doozy.  Xander's failure to deal with the fact that Buffy wasn't ever going to fall in love with him had serious repercussions throughout canon.  It was by turns sad and pathetic, alternating with demented and delusional.  She never saw him as anything but her friend, or brother -- and he just couldn't get past the idea that he had no say in who she dated.  But then again, Buffy allowed them the delusion that they had a voice in her relationships. 

So, is she going to run home?  Or where will she go?  And what will she do when she realizes -- truly realizes what's been done to her.
Great to have you reviewing again, Niamh. You always have the most thoughtful reviews.

Xander always had this possessive streak that just bugged the heck out of me. I saw the challenge and just couldn't stand it - I had to explore the idea.

07/03/2011 04:34 pm
That's a real shocker, horrifically real.
Thanks! I was going for real, if icky. 

07/01/2011 04:24 am

Poor Buffy, up for another round of crush the cutie.  Not sure if I believe that Xander would rape her, no matter how drunk.  I did like the idea of the two of them getting together to commiserate after the Spanya debacle.

I guess I could totally see Xander going off the deep end in season 6. Heck, everyone else pretty much did. 

I guess I do pick on Buffy a lot.. My plot bunnies are evil bitches I guess. But I haven't come up with any really good ideas for beating on Spike lately. 

06/25/2011 01:10 am
OMG!!!   I can't believe Xander did that!!
well, that was the challenge...

magnus374
06/20/2011 08:20 am

Poor Buffy, that's horrible that her "friend" should do that to her. I hope he gets what he deserve.

That is the question - what does he deserve?

I hope to come up with that answer soon...

06/19/2011 02:37 pm
An ooky start - as all non-con stories are - but you've made it believable. Can't wait to see where you're going to take them all.
Thanks! I've got a couple of different paths in mind. We'll see where the muse leads me this time...

06/19/2011 02:18 am
I love how prolific you are.  It seems I can always count on a new well-written tale to come up after finishing the previous one.  You are one of the best new Spuffy authors out there.  And each story gets better and better. 

Poor Buffy - can't imagine how betrayed she feels.  And who'll believe her if she even tells anyone? 

06/19/2011 02:17 am
I love how prolific you are.  It seems I can always count on a new well-written tale to come up after finishing the previous one.  You are one of the best new Spuffy authors out there.  And each story gets better and better. 

Poor Buffy - can't imagine how betrayed she feels.  And who'll believe her if she even tells anyone? 
Thank you so much! You're making me blush...

06/19/2011 12:04 am
wow that was very intense, but also very very good.  I'm intrigued already.  
Thank you! Hope the new chapter will be ready soon.

Sarah
06/18/2011 07:30 pm

I'm enjoying so far - well handled.  Having quickly referred to the challenge, I agree with your choice of episode for something like this to happen.

Poor Buffy! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 
 

Thanks! I was trying not to resort to mystical means, but still have it be realistic. I don't want Xander to have the 'I was posessed' cop-out. But at the same time, I needed to find a point in Xander's life where he was so screwed up that the unthinkable could happen. And because I really am a geek (engineer) I got inspired by a thermodynamics text (seriously). 

Hopefully, next chapter will be up soon!

em_wishes
06/18/2011 09:18 am
Wow.  A painful but powerful start. You definitely left me waitng for the next instalment with baited breath.  I'll be honest and confess that the rape squicked me a bit but that's because I find that topic hard to read - but your telling of it was compelling; well written and emotive.
Thank you very much. 

Sorry for the squickiness (if that is in fact a word), but it was a major component of the challenge.

The rest of the challenge for me will be figuring out what to do with Xander now.