Destroying Entropy by BuffyMeetsSpike
Chapter: Chapter 3

08/26/2011 02:13 am
He is such a caretaker.  He will do anything for the person he loves -- to just be there for that person.  Love how you're showing that, because it's such an important aspect to his character, and a lot of writers tend to leave that out.  Poor lost Buffy, she's been betrayed by her best friends, now doubly so, with Xander's assault. 
As I said, just tattoo 'Love's Bitch' on his forehead. 

I just remember the scene when we first met Drusilla in the series. He went from predator to caretacker in about a heartbeat and it was so fascinating to watch. 

07/03/2011 04:51 pm
Lovely caring Spike soing everything right for Buffy.
He never seems to be able to walk away from her. 

07/01/2011 04:37 am

Nice chapter.  Can't wait for Spike to exact some revenge.  :)

He may have to wait a while, but he will totally be good and ready for it when it gets there. 

06/25/2011 01:30 am
These two are so perfect together.  Spike listens and gives Buffy exactly what she needs.
Not bad for a creature of the night ;-)

nea
06/24/2011 08:31 pm
This story is so very good so far.  I'm glad I came across the recommendation for it on The Spuffy Realm.  You capture the pain and roiling emotions of the situation very well.  I will be looking forward to updates of this story.
Thank you so much! I hope I get some time to work on it soon. 

letitia
06/24/2011 04:09 pm
I just found this story and I couldn't wait to get from chapter 1 to chapter 3.  I know that this was a slam on Dawn's thoughts for her friends, but Buffy is really going to need her support.  AND leave it to Xander to just think he could talk himself out of exactly what he did.  Poor Buffy.  She can only go to the one person who hurt her heart so bad by finding comfort in Anya.  Great job.
Thanks for the encouragement! Gotta get caught up on real life stuff so I can get the next chapter out!

06/24/2011 04:13 am
very interesting update. I thought Xander's reaction to what happened was very realistic. "She's the Slayer! I can't hurt her! and if I did, it's not my fault because she's so much stronger than me!" ugh.  interesting how Spike is always the one that remembers Buffy is a woman first, Slayer second-- just because she is super strong does not mean she can never be vulnerable. I am very excited to see where you go with this.  You have chosen a very difficult topic.  Rape is hard enough, but have it be Xander as the perpetrator? and not psychoOOC!Xander (which I've seen before), but IC!Xander who is in denial....well, good luck with this.  poor, poor Buffy.  It was especially heart-wrenching that it happened after she had poured out her soul to Xander, which is something I wanted to see on the show.  God. 

loving this story. You are a brave, brave person
Thank you so much! I thought the challenge was so interesting. I am struggling hard to keep Xander and everyone else in character. More as soon as possible, I promise!

magnus374
06/22/2011 10:43 am

Spike got to show his caretaker side again.

I wish he'd come and show me that side. And all his other sides...

06/21/2011 12:20 am
I always love it when Buffy allows Spike to look after her, but admittedly I wouldn't wish her to be broken this way. So glad he talked her into going to the hospital. Can't help wondering what Dawn and the Scoobies are up to and why there was no reply at her house. More please...
Working as fast as I can, but I've got this @#&*^$*@& business trip to manage!

em_wishes
06/20/2011 10:50 pm
Another great chapter... running out of compliments... :o)
Thanks ever so!

Sarah
06/20/2011 10:29 pm

I thought this chapter was well written - painful and believable, both Buffy and Spike behaving in character.   

Looking forward to more...



 

Thanks! The hardest part of this challenge has been trying to keep everyone in character.