11/23/2011 02:46 am
Hm Spike is being very rankly. Surprised he isn't taking advantage of the situation.
He's too scared of real-Buffy coming back and staking him good and proper! Thanks for the review :)
Soul of the Rose
09/27/2011 03:20 pm
Lovely, lovely. Solid writing throughout, nice characterization & dialogue. Wonderful premise & great banter between them, even with her memory missing.
Loved this bit:
"When Giles and the gang told me about vampires, I never pictured them lying in a bed reading books.”
“Never was one for conformity.”
Perfect! Thoroughly enjoying this. More soon please!
Loved this bit:
"When Giles and the gang told me about vampires, I never pictured them lying in a bed reading books.”
“Never was one for conformity.”
Perfect! Thoroughly enjoying this. More soon please!
Spike definitely isn't the cookie-cutter vampire! Thanks for your lovely review, I'm glad you're enjoying :)
09/27/2011 02:47 am
Love the literal electricity when Buffy and Spike accidentally touch. Also great description of the various emotions at play in the Magic Shop.
Thanks!
09/26/2011 11:06 pm
great tension between Spike and Buffy, she just knows theres something about him - I like that. Let's see what she learns and how the scoobies can stick their tuppence in. Good update.
Thanks for the review!
Yingxs
09/26/2011 03:34 pm
More please!
It is good to have a Buffy that is without so much hate and prejudice.
Thank you,for writing
It is good to have a Buffy that is without so much hate and prejudice.
Thank you,for writing
Thanks for the review!
09/26/2011 12:25 pm
You've captured everyone just right - including Willow's desire to 'fix it' with a spell. I love the awkwardness between Buffy & Spike.
Thank you, I always worry about my characterization so I really appreciate your review!
Hana
09/26/2011 08:34 am
This is so clever and a pleasure to read.
Thanks!