Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: 19 Green Eyed Monster

01/23/2012 03:32 am

Hi Lilac - glad to see you've started work on this story again.  And very cool that Spike realizes it's Billy they want!  Looking forward to more chapters and hope you're feeling much better. 

Thank you so much.  Yes, much better and am busy working on this story and Santa Claws which I am also updating.  You might like to pretend that is a completely new story!

spitfire
01/22/2012 08:16 pm

Just spent an enjoyable hour or so reading through the whole story as it is so far.  I love the way you write the characters, making it possible to sympathise with each individually (yes, even Angel!), but also making them be such a dysfunctional collective!  Honestly, I want to bang Buffy's, Spike's and Shanny's heads together!!  Billy and Joyce are the real heros of the story of course, and they're so easy to warm to - great characterisation. 
Please finish the story! 
And... Buffy and Spike sneaking upstairs for an afternoon quickie while the kids are playing in the garden?  Some things never change... they are so totally absorbed in each other!  

Thank you so much for reading.  I know I've lost a lot of people because of long delay in updating.   I'm so glad you can see what I am trying to convey - that everyone is to blame, as so often happens in life.  No one is without fault and they are going to have to work that out before they can sort out the mess!   Or not!

SeaPea
01/21/2012 03:55 am
Welcome back!  Nice to see an update.  Everything sure is a mess with our group, eh?  I hope they can all work together to get the kids back.
Hooray!  Someone is reading the story stilll!    Thank you.  Nice to be back.