Dear Diary by ginar369
Chapter: Chapter 1

Buffy Convert
03/25/2014 01:19 pm
Oh, this is great! I can hear Dawn's voice with every word! I like that she is so...I want to say 'real', but I don't mean the others aren't realistic. I guess it's because she seems more sensible than the others. Maybe because she wasn't taught to hate vampires. Racial, or in this case, species, I guess, hatred has to be taught.
I would think the way that Buffy tried to shield Joyce would have applied to Dawn too. With Buffy keeping Dawn in the dark like that Dawn didn't have any preconceived notions. And yes hatred has to be taught no matter where or towards whom it is directed.

no_promises
02/23/2012 04:40 am
I can totally picture Dawn sitting on her bed writing in her diary. 
You have her character pretty spot on.  Well done.
Laying on her stomach feet dangling off the end of the bed writing away about all the tibits she managed to hear. Thanks for reading!