Love Comes to Town by Soul of the Rose
Chapter: Chapter Fifty ~ Fever

Cate
05/19/2012 06:01 pm
Hmmm... not too sure I like the direction with the piece. I'm thinking we are getting too caught up in the Spuffy-loving, left forgetting about the beginning of the story. Buffy was in the process of falling for HER Spike. And HER Spike loved her. Perhaps the same could be said for this dimensions' Spuffy. I guess what I am saying, is that our experiences shape the people we are, and while both dimensions have a Spike and a Buffy, they are inevitably changed, even in the slightest bit, by their different experiences. They may love each other due to their similarities that make them inherently Spike and Buffy, but it feels like they are not truly together because they are not with the people they actually fell for... I’m just giving my two cents. I just can’t really get behind the couple. I still love your writing and the story, but I just really wish something that will happen that will put this dimension shift back into focus. As Giles said in, I think, Chapter 40, this is not Buffy’s life, and it is incredibly immoral what she is doing… I know Spike doesn’t have a soul, but Buffy does! Spike too will realise what is wrong if Buffy can help him! It's just weird that she has totally forgot about her Spike and Spike totally about his Buffy...

04/19/2012 12:57 am
Yay! Update! Lots of lovely hotness too! Glad to see Faith softening a little bit, but I'm still worried about Angel's soul.....
Thanks, lovey! His soul is a pesky little hang up isn't it? Do you think Faith has what it takes to give him perfect happiness though? We'll just have to see about that... ;)

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