I know I waited til chapter 3 to tell you how great this story is (like ALL your stories!), but this is the first one where I could actually read the two words in that anti-spam box, so I couldn't comment before!
You consistently create such a strong Spike--so true to his real character of the early years--humorous, slightly vulnerable, yet strong, edgy Spike.  You've written a fascinating plot twist from the show version, and I'm very intrigued.  I also love the humor you interject which is so absolutely spot-on for Buffy and Spike--such as how Harmony thought he was her boyfriend, and Spike replied that she believed in unicorns, too. 
I can't wait to read the rest of the story.

 

I love Vampire Harmony who is pretty much the same as human Harmony.  Also, that was too mean of Spike to drag Buffy through all that treasure and not let her pick up a little bling for herself.  :)

Giles and Spike getting along is great. Those two had a lot in common if they would ever admit it. You know William went to good schools plus University and so did Giles. They like a lot of the same music and both have the same sense of humor.

I don't I could stake Harmony run her out of town hell yeah but stake her nah. She is too inept as a vamp to stake.

Love the bantering - both between Buffy & Spike and between Spike & Giles. And Harmony is so funny! More please...