Time after Time by BuffyMeetsSpike
Chapter: A Trip to the City

magnus374
06/24/2013 10:07 am

Now Buffy has something to do, and I liked her thought about how Billy Idol would look in this universe.

Ya gotta wonder...

06/21/2013 05:06 am
    I just read my review from this chapter because I was excitable after I finished the last chapter.  I was afraid I was going to sound like a spazz.

 There were hints of spaz, but mostly just spelling errors.  I only write this to apologize if my other review for this chapter is unreadable.
That's no problem! Thank God for my beta, because once in a while I get those 'It's late and I'm tired errors' and I just want to hide my head in shame. 

spoikesbytch
06/21/2013 02:13 am
Gah!  Can't wait for the next update.  Really enjoying this story.
Thanks so much! Read on. 

SeaPea
06/21/2013 01:32 am
What a great idea to have her meet up with Lorne!  Now we're getting somewhere.
This is true. Glad you like it!

06/20/2013 10:51 pm
Why do I have the disturbing feeling that Riley thinks he is going to get lucky? I think he is reading more into Buffy's words than she means. Won't he be upset! As long as he doesn't do anything to Buffy.

Finally someone who isn't trying to fit her for a straight jacket and rubber room!!! Lorne believes her and is willing to help her without questioning her sanity. I know he has an edge her friends don't being able to read her aura but her friends really aren't on the ball right now.
She does have to lead Riley on a bit for her purposes, but it is a necessary evil. 

06/20/2013 10:14 pm
At last, a chance! Keeping my fingers crossed. Thanks for the great update.
You are so welcome! Read on!

mike13z50
06/20/2013 10:00 pm
Excellent update, the middle portion was kind of slow but it looks like things are starting to move again.
Sorry if it seemed slow. But glad you are staying with it!

06/20/2013 09:38 pm
Finally, a chance!  And Riley is probably thinking the same thing.   I love all the little details of walking down the street, the vampires, and finally meeting Lorne.  Hopefully, the Oracles will come through.  
Check out the next chapter for the word from the Oracles...

06/20/2013 09:34 pm
   Arrrg,  I had a reply formulating in my btprain but you went and left that whole big tease at the ned and now.that's all Incan focus on.

  I love this story, and I would say hurry but ,like I mentioned I like this story sotake your time .


    Ps.    I kinda hated the Riley character because you know, boring, but poor Riley.

    PPS.  Hurry, hurry huury!
Thanks so much! I'm at a conference right now, but I will try to get more up when I get back. 

06/20/2013 08:06 pm
You did a great job with Lorne and Caritas, I can just picture him coming to Buffy's aid the way he did.  And at last a sliver of hope for Buffy, much needed as she'll surely go nuts if she has to stay with Riley and co much longer.
Thanks so much. Lorne is a hoot, and I enjoyed working on that whole scene. Stay tuned for more!

06/20/2013 07:46 pm
TextI hope it gets her to spike and it puts things right. And please let him be a vampire. Good chapter
Thanks! I'm still trying to figure out the answer to what form Spike/William will be. Hopefully you'll enjoy it no matter what form he ends up in. 

06/20/2013 05:27 pm
Oh dear. Wesley the Wonder Wuss hasn't had his experiences with A.I. in this world to help him grow up and become a Confident Good Guy. With no Angel/Cordelia to influence him, is he still an inmpverished, slightly incompetent 'Rogue Demon Hunter'?
Ah well, perhaps she'll find him tomorrow.
Thank goodness for dear Lorne (R.I.P. Andy). I hope the Oracles will be willing to help Buffy....
I always loved Lorne. I needed to find a way to write him in, but it didn't seem like it would make sense for her to go there in serch of him. And now, off to the Oracles!