Shame on You by ginar369
Chapter: Chapter 23

06/20/2014 02:26 pm
Terrific story - you did a great job meeting the requirements - lovely ceremony to end the story.  I also very much liked how you used at the problems going on with Angel over in LA - just enough information and it took Angel out of the events.  One gets tired of having Angel rush in to be the big enforcer of what Buffy should do or how she should act or how she is his by some Angel logic.  

03/17/2014 07:44 pm
Quite a different take on season five.  I enjoyed having Buffy and Joyce both survive it!  Very good to see that you didn't villify Xander, Giles or Willow, though they were technically 'villains', you didn't bash them.  Loved seeing Wesley... It's so rare to see him working with the scoobies after he stops being a dweeb!

DeepBlueJoy
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I can't believe I missed your review! Bad Gina!!

I just couldn't kill Joyce. She might not have rated high on the mom scale in seasons 1, 2 or 3 but she was trying when Buffy hit college. I have to admit it wasn't easy to be so kind to Xander. I don't really like him much. But they weren't in control of their actions here so I couldn't make then into truly evil people. They were caught by circumstance and really not to blame.  Scruffy, demon ass kicking Wes is soooo HOT!

Sarah
09/08/2013 03:08 pm

I'm not too sure what happened to my original review but it seems to have disappeared!!! :( I read and left a review for this chapter on the same day you posted it and now I know this review won't be as good since it won't have that spontaneous and heartfelt reaction that would have been there for the original one! Firstly, thank you so much for taking an interest in my challenge, you certainly did a brilliant job and created a wonderful story around the original plotline. This chapter was bittersweet in that we have the lovely wedding scene but the sad words saying 'The End'. :'( I also wanted to congratulate you on keeping all the characters true to their personalities throughout the entire story (quite an achievement!!!) and also thanks for including Graham into the mix - he's the only soldier I ever actually liked! :) Once again thank you for a simply outstanding story and for a very satisfying Spuffy ending! :)

You're welcome. Out of all the reviews this received, on this site and others, you're reviews meant the most. I was constantly nervous that you would hate what I had done with your challenge! It thrilled me to no end each time I read one of your reviews and saw that you were enjoying what I had done. Keeping them in character isn't easy! Personal feelings and prejudices were constanly warring! But I tried my best and I'm glad you think I managed it. I have to agree about Graham. He was the only one I could stand. (You should catch him on his new show Longmire on A&E!) Once again I'm soo glad you liked it!

09/06/2013 10:39 am
I've really enjoyed this story, thanks for all your hard work.
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

SeaPea
09/06/2013 04:40 am
Nice story.  I liked that cleansing of the demon thing - I've not seen anything like that before and it's an interesting idea.
 Thanks for reading and reviewing!