Nobody's Hero by ginar369
Chapter: Suspicion and Distrust (Ch 10)

Jane
11/15/2013 08:36 am

So pleased with the update. Well it's taken time but glad to see Buffy finally beginning to question the choices she's been making. Can't believe she's stuck it out with Cordy and her band of bullies, Buffy's a hero. Wish Gile's wouldn't let the evil souless vampire comments just pass without a challenge, Buffy's let Angel into her life on the basis he's been cursed with a soul, whereas Spike's a self made champion. Hopeing she's gonna hea something that will make her think. She's stubborn but I hope not stupid. Great update.  

No Buffy isn't stupid but she is stubborn and trying very hard to do what she thinks her mother wants. She blames herself and the slaying for the divorce and hopes that by being a normal girl things will be better. She is going to overhear more than she wants.

Jay
11/15/2013 04:17 am
So glad to see the update. I am loving it. Looking forward to more. 
Thanks. RL's been kicking my butt lately but things should be better now.

11/13/2013 10:49 pm
TextI am so glad that this story is being posted. I love your writing. Please write more stories. Will Buffy come to her senses anytime soon please. This particular version of Buffy is annoying.
Eventually. Buffy is living firmly in denial. How many kids of divorce do you see pretending that every thing will go back to the way it was before? Add the fact that she blames the slaying on her parents divorce and you have a Buffy that just wants to run away from reality. She'll come around.

11/13/2013 02:31 pm
Looking good. :)
Thanks! :)