Family by stuffandnonsense
Chapter: Chapter 20

05/05/2015 02:11 am
poor spike.  poor Buffy.  Poor Dawn.  poor Bohdan. He's walked into a buzz saw.

Blue
He has indeed.

04/30/2014 01:51 pm
Great chapter. Love that Spike is so very much, and yet still vulnerable both physically and emotionally.
Thanks!

04/29/2014 11:19 pm
Poor Spike, will Buffy and Bohdan meet up, and will we find out what he wants?  More, soon, please.
Not *so* poor Spike - he took out at least a hundred demons in an epic fight.

Bohdan was meant to have his epic reveal about 3 chapters ago, but I keep packing too much into my outlines. Very, very soon.

04/29/2014 03:31 pm
I like Bohdan, but want to know his backstory and find out who he has has entrusted his soul to.
Poor Spike. Glad Dawn is going to look after him. Buffy should know so that she can take her mind off her own troubles by looking after him as well.
Yeah - the mystery is getting a bit old now. My original outline had Bohdan doing the big reveal 3 chapters ago, but my chapter outlines keep being too ambitious....

04/29/2014 09:02 am
Very exciting, the originality of your story grows with each chapter.  It's a real treat.
Thank you so much for saying that!

04/29/2014 02:50 am
So who set up Spike?  i can't believe Anya did it.  Great chapter! 
Definitely not Anya. Stay tuned!