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More Toil and Trouble by slaymesoftly 09/02/2014 10:04 am Double bubble indeed. I hope Buffy's lalala attitude to both problems doen't bite her on the bum! It's good that Giles overheard the last conversation, he at least seems to be on the ball. :) Who knows? Maybe it will work out.... 09/02/2014 02:10 am I hope you managed to keep it fluffy, as you wrote on your lj :). I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Great banter and a lot to look forward to. BTW, sorry about my previous entry - I remember selecting the "private comment," but it seems there is some bug that turns my private comments public :(. The formatting got partly fixed for chp.2 - no more bold or lines between each line of the text. Instead of that, the font size increase function does not work for the chapter - no matter which size I click it still shows the smallest one :(. Everything is fine with chps 1 & 3 though :). It will definitely end fluffy - it's just hard to be really fluffy when your potentials problems are out-of-control Willow and/or The Initiative. But I'm trying. Maybe if Buffy and Spike are amusing enough when together, it will make up for any bad things that happen.... No prob. I don't use a beta very often anymore, so I'm always happy to have someone let me know if/when I've screwed up. I'm my own worst editor. :) Hmmm no idea about the font size - it actually looks huge when I paste into the Word box, and normal when it gets into the text box. That's a Dia thing if it isn't working. No idea what I did to creat the lines and the bold, but no doubt it was something! 09/02/2014 12:34 am So... Giles is going to be very interested in Spike's concern for Buffy's welfare. Hope Buffy takes him seriously and is cautious. I really didn't understand why on the show, Maggie wasn't more interested in investigating exactly what a slayer is. I'd have though that she would have considered Buffy a perfect basis for a supersoldier - if she could only figure out where her powers came from. Still worried about Willow... I'm sure she would have at least wanted to know if there was a way for her to use those powers. Of course, she had Adam lying there waiting to be awakened... 09/02/2014 12:07 am Would Riley really tolerate Initiative shanigans done to Buffy? (sarcasm) LOL He does in all my stories. :) | |||
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