Unexpected Arrival by Mefiant
Chapter: Chapter 20

dicecanntcry
02/18/2007 04:28 am
Ok - I dont quite understand.

Buffy is totally cool that another woman is sleeping with the love of her life AND they're all best friends?

Shouldn't she at least have some sort of jealousy? It would make the story much more believable.

Rebecca is totally fine her husband is in love with another woman?

And when Spike's wife dies he acts his dog just got ran over?

I'm really not trying to be difficult - this plot line has a lot of potential - but it just doesn't make sense to me,

08/18/2006 05:26 am
OMG!!! She did die! Poor spike and the baby and now what are Joyce and Anne(William's mother?)Can't wait to continue this this heart wrenching chapter. Excellent story.

06/14/2006 02:58 am
wow...this is incredible...i loved rebecca, it's sad that she's dead...but now buffy will be whole, but not to hate spike like xander thinks... excellent update ;)