I Would Still Have Loved You by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Chapter Ten

05/06/2016 11:43 pm
All in all, Buffy's handling this really well - perhaps a bit over-optimistic re Riley -  maturity is making a big difference.
She's really a very different person by this point in her life. Which may take some adjusting on the part of her friends and family...

05/06/2016 06:28 am
I've been holding off reading until now, because I really prefer getting the full effect of a completed story (though I've made a few exceptions). I do really like the way you've preserved the tension here, what with a still-active Initiative, a very dangerous witch with self-entitlement issues, and Spike not having the Ring. (Or does he? I must have missed it, but I can't recall it being given to him.) It's interesting watching the future pair try to work out permutations of their actions. Well written, as always.
Um - I don't think you missed it. I think Ch 11 is when Buffy finally gets to the ring and gives it to him.   Thanks for reading - I hope you enjoy the rest of it. :)

05/05/2016 12:22 pm
Time travel makes my brain hurt, but I can't help but be fascinated.
What can we change? What can't we change? What shouldn't we even try to change? Have we changed too much? What have we forgotten altogether?
And once the changes start taking effect... what will happen that we weren't expecting?
Can't wait...
Makes my brain hurt too. LOL  It's those unintended consequences that they have to worry about. Sometimes it's better the devil you know...