OMG! Did the PTB appoint Spike as Dawn's protector? I hope she pulls herself together soon and manages to talk sense to the Scoobies or Spike will be left with the Initiative. I see that Captain Cardbored is a vicious, cruel bastard in this story. Will he still be able to reel in Buffy? More story please.

Interesting introduction of Dawn into the show - Riley and the rest of the Initiative so need to die horrible and painful deaths

I like the idea of this, I'm interested in finding out Spike and Dawns relationship and whether Buffy will kick Riley's ass in time...