Your story is amazing!! I love the inner dialogue, you capture the characters so well and their thoughts sound JUST perfect. Also, the way they would act in turn to what they were thinking is spot on! PLEASE keep writing! (Also, cupid is funny as hell and i love him.)

TextWell, she's very annoying with her denial....but without it there'd be no story. And this is a great story.

Glad that you have the chance to get back to this work - love your voice for Buffy particularly, but Spike is outstanding also.  Nice touch with the love song lyrics.

 

Your characterization of them is right on, just as a canon script would be. Have to laugh a little though, the way that they're engaging in this constant battle within themselves. Yeah, I know I'm just a tad twisted. Really enjoying it.