Evil Riley is really scary :( Although I have to admit, I love his change in persona. I like the Dawn/Spike friendship, and Xander's vehement disdain for Riley now hehehe. I've always liked Graham and I'm glad you're not making him a creep like Riley. Speaking of the casually cool, I love Oz... I really hope he stays in this story! This is very interesting story and I can't wait to read more!

poor Spike! Yay for angry Xander! Ok, I know those other chapters are done - let's have 'em!

I cannot tell you how much I am loving this story, even though you've just about made me bawl in parts of it....poor poor Spike...and evil hateful Riley!!! I'm in the middle of writing an evil-Riley,Initiative fic, and my evil Riley does not even come close to comparing!!! OMG!!! Please please update soon I have to see them get him out of there and get him better!! :( Great, great story!!!