excellant story - really good job so far and loojking forward to reading the rest~

Incredible fight sequence- I had bated breath and everything. I love the bond growing between these two :]]

If this is rusty then whoo weeee ... I'd love to see you at full throttle. You did a great job with this chapter. Loved it!

Yikes! Pretty bad place Spike and Buffy have found themselves. When are they going to pay some attention to the crystal? That might not be meant to help Buffy but it will help Spike.

I'm glad to hear you plan to update more, I'm really interested in this story, it has such a unique plot line :)

Brilliant chapter I love adventure stories.

Love it, it's very good so far and very original I think. Keep up the good work.

Damn Kyra this was amazing! The action was incredible!!! I'm loving the UST between spike and Buffy too and how they have to rely on each other *sighs happily* You're not rusty at all, you nailed this chapter. Glad you're back, we've missed you! *hugs*