wow this is getting intense...looking forward to more :)

CH 40 - great chapter as always sweetie - I loved the interaction with Faith - i can;t wait to see how the spell affects or does not affect her. Great story!

Nope, reread the whole chapter again and Yes everything works, from Faith coming back to SunnyD to Dawn's ordeal in the ER. All's good.

Loved the line about Oz and lesbians. Loved the comforting of Buffy and Spike for Dawn. Willow is in DEEP trouble. If she hadn't messed with the memories, Casey would still be alive. When they get their memories back, Willow is in for it big time. I wonder if Willow will even live, if the hounds get her. Look forward to more.

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it and can't wait to find out what the outcome of the spell will be. I cannot believe that Willow caused Caseu's death - because if Dawn had remembered then she would never have been walking after dark with him. i feel so so sorry for Dawnie. Willow has got to pay!

AAAaaaaaaaa! Ok, Ok calming. Shhhh shhhh. I’m good, I’m Good. Ok, So Last week I started reading “Origins” and I read threw to “Origins Revelations”. So Basically been reading every moment I wasn’t working or tenden my youngens. So the screaming was my shock at coming to a dead-end. My nerves are on end. The withdraws will be grate. Please, O Please do update soon.

You could kind of tell you had a hard time writing this because it just jumped all around but you do have so much stuff going on. I really loved how you portrayed Dawn's grief and how she instinctively wanted her parents. You got me to tear up! Loved how Faith arrived, you really do such a great job keeping everyone in character.

You could kind of tell you had a hard time writing this because it just jumped all around but you do have so much stuff going on. I really loved how you portrayed Dawn's grief and how she instinctively wanted her parents. You got me to tear up! Loved how Faith arrived, you really do such a great job keeping everyone in character.

You know it works wonderfully. Loved it as always. So I guess the Mommy and Daddy thing is Dawn's drugged and grieved subconsious ripping through the spell. Love to see how Faith works into this revamped crew.

It works perfectly. I love the scene with Spike, Buffy and Dawn, acting as the family unit they are. Very moving. I'm curious to see what happens when Kristen starts answering questions. Once again, I like the way you're bringing Faith into this. She is both determined and resourceful; she'll be a needed ally. Oz communing with the wolf was humorous and touching. Very Oz.

It works. Really loving this story.

Great update. Really glad that Kristen has come back into the fic; hope we learn more about her soon. Dawn was so heartbreaking; really nice moment with Spike and Buffy trying to comfort her and at the same time not knowing what she's talking about with all the "Daddy"ing. You touched on so many of the ongoing threads of the story, like the Huntsmen and Faith, Oz & Tara. Really looking forward to what happens next with the plot and the character interations.

It works. I just hope the Huntsman breaks the spell before Kirsten undergoes too much questioning (spell broken > Spike remembers her saving Dawn > Spike grateful > Spike doesn't question her). It'd be interesting to keep the suspense up on her origins (although of course I have my own theory). I also wonder whether Tara and the others will try to protect Willow from the Huntsman. I can think of several scenarios, and I'm eager to find out. I doubt Angelus will be dealt with for a while though. I vaguely wonder who'll get to stake him (not the Huntsman, that's the only thing I'm sure of).

I enjoyed this chap. Poor Dawn wanting her dad... that was so sweet. And Faith made it there... hopefully they can begin to unravel the mystery of what has happened to them.

It all works, Nia! Poor Dawn. I hope Faith can answer some questions and that they can find a way to break the spell. They are all at such a disadvantage until they know what's really going on. More when you can, please?

I think it works quite well. I'm anxious to see how badly Dawn tortures Willow when the spell is revealed. And how Faith will work into the group dynamic. I love this story, and think it's a great update! Hope your arm's feeling better. -Lisa

OMG!! That's terrible about Casey. Are the Huntsmen after Willow? Maybe they could take out Angelus as well. I hope Faith can help break Willow's evil spell. Tara could help if somebody could get her away from Willow. This is such a good story. More soon please.

"Staring down at his crotch for a long minute, Oz wondered idly what was it about him and lesbians. . . ." LOVED that line! Can't wait to find out more about Kirsten :)