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Poppycock (formerly Dead Things fic) by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Two
01/01/2009 09:19 pm
Really love your portrayal of Buffy's emotional state at that time.
Thank you. I'm glad she seems "right" to you. :)
09/10/2006 11:06 pm
wow...that was dark and painful and intense, but beautifully done...an excellent chapter :)
thanks - DeadThings just lends itself to so many possibilities
jane
11/19/2005 04:34 pm
I really like it more please.
Thanks - more coming up.
sam
11/19/2005 12:02 pm
okay, i like your stories and everything, but i have to say that i don't really care for this one. first of all, this chapter was basically the same thing that happened in the episode. i was hoping you would have changed it more and not have him get beat up, i can't even watch this episode at all because of that part. it gets me so pissed off. buffy is still a bitch here and i was really hoping you would have made her better.
I'm sorry you're not liking it. I tried to give a little insight into Buffy's emotions and give Spike a little more sympathy for her internal termoil, but perhaps it isn't working the way I'd hoped. Not having him get beat up just wasn't an option -it is a very important event in their relationship. But I think/hope I give it a better outcome than on the show. Please read the next couple of chapters and let me know what you think.
~*~Tasha~*~
11/19/2005 09:09 am
Yep, definitely grim. Hope it gets Spuffy again soon. I mean yeah the balcony scene was always an awesome one in my book, but what followed what awful. I look forward to seeing where you take it.
It will get better. I promise!
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