Aloha my love by Isabel
Chapter: Welcome to Paradise

12/01/2009 03:54 am
 I'm addicted already! It's just so funny and cute.  ^^

07/21/2008 04:33 am
Just one question it seem's to be summer but what time periode in Buffy is it? So far though I love the idea. I actually used to live on Kauai and for about 3 months I lived on Oahu, God I miss hawaii so much!!!!!!!

02/24/2007 03:14 am
Very, very cute story. It promises to be great fun already. It is an interesting idea, Buffy being aloud a vacation...
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I thought Buffy deserved a vacation too ;)

08/01/2006 09:44 am
Cool story so far.  Just one suggestion though...  You have different speakers in the same paragraphs in many places, which makes it a little hard to read, because you have to back up and be sure you know who is speaking.  It's much easier to read if you always separate the speakers.  Please don't take offense though, cause, I'm not knocking you.  I made the exact same mistake, when I first started writing and someone had to point that out to me, too.  Otherwise, nice story so far.  I'm off to read the next chapter.  :)

fallen_angel
03/30/2006 12:15 am
canada not so much a bad place if u move south to toronto*my home town*, but for spuffy romance it's gotta be maui! so gonna see spike in a hawaiin shirt?or maybe swim gear? or...*puts on devlish smile and goes to check fic rating*
lol you're right, nothing wrong with Canada. Especially since I live in Toronto too. Maybe I could write a fic in which Spike goes to T.O... And end up having to work as a stripper for one night because he ran out of cash. Do we have a strip club for women here? I don't even know. We had one in Montreal. Thanks for your review.

03/29/2006 03:37 am
This chapter is really cute. I love the exchange so far between Buffy and Spike. :)

ComedyofErrors
11/28/2005 02:25 am
THis is a great begining. Can't wait to see more.
Thanks, I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the fic.