hes got to be lying...gotta find out :)

Good update. Still love this story. The only thing that I find distracting is the logo at the top of the chapters now. For those of us on an 800x600 screen, the logo is wider than that. So the text now scrolls off the page to the right. I love your story enough to keep reading, but it does make it more difficult to read it through smoothly because I have to keep scrolling left to right with every sentence. Look forward to more updates. I do love the logo though. Very nice.

great update. looking forward to the remaining chapters and the promise of a sequel. thanks for writing.