The Bottom Line by Dirktavian
Chapter: Two- Trust me?

Cate
08/22/2008 02:47 pm

That was a perfect chapter. You chose the absolute perfect thing for Buffy to do for Spike. I love how you described their intimacy, and how clearly that it was a rarity. I also loved how intense you made Spike, with his hands trembling from the sheer implications of Buffy's trust. Beautiful.

03/10/2007 01:37 pm
Those brief moments of happiness to enjoy, William must be thrilled. Even out of guilt, he'll take whatever crumb she's willing to give. Hate that she still can't bring herself to apologize but I guess second best will have to do. Wonderful chapter, thanks.

08/07/2006 10:28 pm
very good read, thank you

05/26/2006 07:08 am
very, very sexy... :) like this fic very much :)

~*~Tasha~*~
01/06/2006 05:49 am
nice ending. Wish she would have told Spike she wanted to stay. Didn't she see that he was only giving her the clothes to keep her from being all mean with how she normally did it? Poor Spike. Good story. It isn't marked as complete even though you have it listed as fin at the end. To mark is complete just go into your account click on edit/delete stories and then click on the completed NO area. It should then reset it to yes. {Smiles} Look forward to seeing what else your mind comes up with for stories.
Tasha-- Thanks for reading and leaving feedback. Trust me, Buffy makes me want to go "UGH!" all the time, but I felt I had to write her actions this way to stay true to the story. Thanks for the hint about marking the story completed!