nojiri23
05/02/2010 02:47 pm
Absolutely lovely. It rings very true.
Soul of the Rose
03/06/2010 12:02 am
I hesitated to read this because I like my Buffy living & preferably by Spike's side... I'm so glad I got past it to enjoy this beautiful piece.
One of the best Spike narratives I have ever read. Pitch perfect characterization; capturing both his innate intelligence (which is often softened by other writers) & his cheeky North London patois. You achieved the balance of predator & poet that is Spike perfectly.
Tenderly written, touching, heartbreaking. Amazing.
One of the best Spike narratives I have ever read. Pitch perfect characterization; capturing both his innate intelligence (which is often softened by other writers) & his cheeky North London patois. You achieved the balance of predator & poet that is Spike perfectly.
Tenderly written, touching, heartbreaking. Amazing.
Soul of the Rose
03/06/2010 12:01 am
I hesitated to read this because I like my Buffy living & preferably by Spike's side... I'm so glad I got past it to enjoy this beautiful piece.
One of the best Spike narratives I have ever read. Pitch perfect characterization; capturing both his innate intelligence (which is often softened by other writers) & his cheeky North London patois. You achieved the balance of predator & poet that is Spike perfectly.
Tenderly written, touching, heartbreaking. Amazing.
One of the best Spike narratives I have ever read. Pitch perfect characterization; capturing both his innate intelligence (which is often softened by other writers) & his cheeky North London patois. You achieved the balance of predator & poet that is Spike perfectly.
Tenderly written, touching, heartbreaking. Amazing.
01/31/2010 12:31 am
Wow, that is absolutely, stunningly beautiful. And that last line, "And love died with her" is such a moving culmination to it all. You are proof that there doesn't have to be a plot to grab a reader's attention (and heart). A thought well-written is just as powerful. Well done!
Time of Change
12/29/2009 03:33 pm
Completely worth doing. I love that you write such a nuanced Spike. He's far, far from an angel, and his humanity is agonizing, but he can't not long for the warmth.
07/10/2006 08:04 am
how heart wrenchingly said, but no less true. marsterfully written
Time of Change
02/23/2006 10:44 pm
>>Please review and tell me if it was worth doing.>>
Oh yes.
Oh yes.
02/15/2006 03:53 am
Very worth doing, I loved it
02/13/2006 02:07 am
OMG ery powerful piece :P
02/11/2006 08:14 pm
that's very sad and heartbreakingly beautiful, while also stark and realistic... i love the descriptions of everyone dealing...or not dealing...with Buffy's death...thanx for writing this :)
idk5743228
01/29/2006 03:48 pm
I thought this was a well written piece. I felt his emotions. I would love to see more.
01/29/2006 07:14 am
Hey! I liked it. :) I thought that the simplicity in which Spike used to describe his feelings for her, at the end, made whole chapter seem all the more powerful. A simple thing and everything ~ & ~ To Spike, Buffy was love... I thought that was very cool! Keep it up!
katakata
01/29/2006 07:11 am
A lovely piece quite poignant in its brevity. Well done.