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A Heavy Heart, Beloved by Jess Marie nojiri23 05/02/2010 02:47 pm Absolutely lovely. It rings very true. Soul of the Rose 03/06/2010 12:02 am I hesitated to read this because I like my Buffy living & preferably by Spike's side... I'm so glad I got past it to enjoy this beautiful piece. One of the best Spike narratives I have ever read. Pitch perfect characterization; capturing both his innate intelligence (which is often softened by other writers) & his cheeky North London patois. You achieved the balance of predator & poet that is Spike perfectly. Tenderly written, touching, heartbreaking. Amazing. Soul of the Rose 03/06/2010 12:01 am I hesitated to read this because I like my Buffy living & preferably by Spike's side... I'm so glad I got past it to enjoy this beautiful piece. One of the best Spike narratives I have ever read. Pitch perfect characterization; capturing both his innate intelligence (which is often softened by other writers) & his cheeky North London patois. You achieved the balance of predator & poet that is Spike perfectly. Tenderly written, touching, heartbreaking. Amazing. 01/31/2010 12:31 am Wow, that is absolutely, stunningly beautiful. And that last line, "And love died with her" is such a moving culmination to it all. You are proof that there doesn't have to be a plot to grab a reader's attention (and heart). A thought well-written is just as powerful. Well done! Time of Change 12/29/2009 03:33 pm Completely worth doing. I love that you write such a nuanced Spike. He's far, far from an angel, and his humanity is agonizing, but he can't not long for the warmth. 07/10/2006 08:04 am how heart wrenchingly said, but no less true. marsterfully written Time of Change 02/23/2006 10:44 pm >>Please review and tell me if it was worth doing.>> Oh yes. 02/15/2006 03:53 am Very worth doing, I loved it 02/13/2006 02:07 am OMG ery powerful piece :P 02/11/2006 08:14 pm that's very sad and heartbreakingly beautiful, while also stark and realistic... i love the descriptions of everyone dealing...or not dealing...with Buffy's death...thanx for writing this :) idk5743228 01/29/2006 03:48 pm I thought this was a well written piece. I felt his emotions. I would love to see more. 01/29/2006 07:14 am Hey!  I liked it.  :)  I thought that the simplicity in which Spike used to describe his feelings for her, at the end, made whole chapter seem all the more powerful.  A simple thing and everything ~ & ~ To Spike, Buffy was love... I thought that was very cool!  Keep it up! katakata 01/29/2006 07:11 am A lovely piece quite poignant in its brevity. Well done. | |||
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