Wonderful angle on the dawn/monk story. Liked your use of Spike as the source for Dawn. Wish that mystery could have been kept more private for the bond between Dawn and Spike. Liked the idea of Spike seeing Graham as his. I can take or leave the spuffy- but a adore Spike and Dawn friendship. And the creation of any type of "lore" as you've done with Anya's old knowledge etc.

Would have liked to read more but I'll just enjoy what's here.

Grrr evil... I absolutely adore your story. Your alternate universe is so different, however still reminiscent of characters; and that is a great skill to be able to acheive that. As I was saying your characterisation and character development is pretty much perfect... I just wanna read more! I cannot really give you any constructive criticism because, being the grammar nazi that I am, I find little to no errors. Please, please update!

Good chapter. Maybe the idea of Dawn as Buffy´s sister and Dawn being Spike´s daughter can complicate or do a little "eewwww" the relation between Spike and Buffy.
Next chapter right now.

Just reread your story and I still love it. I am hoping that it will be finished some time in the near future. I know that real life gets in the way sometimes. Just wanted you to know that you still have fans out here.

Are you going to finish this great story?  I really hate unfinished fanfic because I don't have the skills to finish the story for myself.  You are a wonderful writer.  Please tell me why you left us hanging on serveral of your fine fics.

Jacque
cooljacque@sbcglobal.net

Sorry, I forgot to include my email address so you could respond to me.  Love your work.

Are you going to finish this great story?  I really hate unfinished fanfic because I don't have the skills to finish the story for myself.  You are a wonderful writer.  Please tell me why you left us hanging on serveral of your fine fics.

Jacque

Excellent! I love your take on the Creation story; and I love the interaction b/n D & S; good D/S stories are some of my favs, and yours is top notch; please update again soon!

Oh please update this.I have always been a HUGE fan of Spike/Dawn.Either romance or friendship.I love the whole Spike/Dawn father/daughter angle you have going here.I'm also liking how Graham has become part of the vamp family.Also love how Spike is making Buffy blush.And sorry but as much as I love Tara I have always been a bigger fan of Oz/Willow.Oz always cracked me up.SO please update this soon I love it

LOL..Spike iz his usaul self unh?...well this is a truely different bt FANTASTIC fic...so plyz do keep 'em comin!!!!

OI!!!!!!!!!! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LIKE EVER FOR SOME UPDATES ON THIS AMAZING STORY AND ALL I GET IS A FEW CHAPTERS *POUTS* PLZ WRITE SOME MORE I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY :) ;)

Seems more of a dawn/spike story, maybe I missed that? So you really make Buffy out to be useless in this story. Is there any point to her presents in it, aside from having someone for everyone else to mock and laugh at?

Enjoying this story very much! Love that Spike is Dawn's dad, basically.
Please, please update!

can't wate 2 see more of this fic from you so please keep up the grate work .

LOL i like it...

LOL ... heck yeah I'd put more than just an eye on Spike. Dang. Does that girl have eyes in her eyes? Good chapter update, and I'm glad to see an update ... even if it took me forever to get it.

Ooo, just got caught up on the story. Novel idea, can't wait to read more

Is it wrong of me to say that I enjoy your version better than Joss'? Everything you say makes sense, everything comes together nicely. The explanation for the hell god, the demons, the first slayer... That was fabulous! You're an excellent writer with a wild imagination.

LMAO, very good, very informative chappie.

If Buffy still doesn't want to put more than her eye on him, I'll be happy to assist. She can go to bed alone (serve her right).

Good update. I hope that Buffy will be decent now. She is not always a bitch.

good chapter, but i do hope that buffy stops being a stuck up bitch and realize that the REAL love of her life is standing right in front of her.

seeya

I am loving the story and can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!

Fantastic! Love it!

Maybe Buffy could try to be a little civil to Spike now?

Maybe Buffy will start to be a little civil to Spike now?