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Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 1
12/22/2006 10:28 pm
Very interesting. i wonder what happened to make their daughter decide to cut them out of her life, and why in turn she decided to sent her children to live with them. Seems little Joyce has a bit of slayer in her blood, while Billy seems like Spike before he was turned. It will be interesting to see how they respond to Joyce's questions.
08/28/2006 08:57 pm
Love them - Joyce is a little devil and I'm sure Billy won't be far behind.
Verda
07/23/2006 02:20 am
Very, very interesting. Going to try and get caught up tonight. Thanks for the read.
04/01/2006 05:32 pm
Cute and subtly awesome :]:] loved it
romero
03/15/2006 04:09 am
This is a great one shot. It gave a nice glimpse into Buffy and Spike's future and what could be.
03/13/2006 08:45 pm
I'm intrigued! What's going on? reading on...(dashes off)
02/24/2006 04:18 pm
Cute story! It would be interesting to see what would happen next! Could Granny and Grandad control the lil hellions?
Well, Granny and Grandad won’t be as old as people keep thinking they will be, so I’m expecting all sorts of trouble!
02/24/2006 02:36 pm
That was really good.
Suzanne
02/24/2006 12:09 am
I totally agree with you! this must be a really long fic!!!
Glad you liked it. Am thinking about continuing.
02/23/2006 03:05 pm
Now that was just a great story. And leave it to Spike and Buffy to have a family that just continued to grow in "their" old world. Loved the story.
Glad you enjoyed it. Will be writing continuation soon.
Lou
02/23/2006 02:07 pm
Aaaah - sweet.
02/23/2006 12:28 pm
This is great. I'm already loving Joyce. I like that she's more like Buffy and Billy is more like Spike. And they named their daughter Shanshu? How cool is that? lol Love it.
Thanks for review. Yes, I reckon I will write the rest of this very soon. Shanshu had a very difficult childhood!
Weaver
02/23/2006 11:11 am
This is lovely, and I didn't have and trouble understanding it. Subtle and charming.
Thanks for review. So pleased you understood it. I keep rereading first chp and can’t see what people find hard, except for lack of first names, perhaps. Next chp will be easier. Promise.
02/23/2006 10:14 am
Hmm... So, Spike got the Shansu, and now they have grandkids. Interesting. I wonder if they stay old? Or maybe this is going to be like a story, they tell their grandkids about. This is different, and now, I'm curious. :)
Well, I’ll hopefully get to next chp soon and asuage your curiosity.
02/23/2006 06:16 am
huh? great story.. i think it would make a good longer story so that we can see how all this happened.. little bt confusing at the end but otherwise quite good..
02/23/2006 04:55 am
Tee hee...well no wonder their daughter's pissed with a name like that! LOL! Oh yes, this deserves continuation and then some. Nicely done.
Kathleen
Kathleen
vladt
02/23/2006 04:14 am
excellent standalone or excellent first chapter.thanks for the fine read.
Thanks for reviewing. Think I will write on. The plot suddenly exploded in my head. Messy!
ct114
02/23/2006 03:33 am
OK???? intersting. i would like to see this go further yet it could say like this.
Thanks for review. This started as a one off, but now the plot is begging to be written.
Time of Change
02/23/2006 03:12 am
Very interesting. I'm thinking Shashu broke her parents' hearts with her dream of being normal.
Glad you liked it. You’re quite right. There is a lot of explaining to do but in Buffy’s case, I think it’s a case of deja vu!
02/23/2006 02:09 am
Huh? The narrative from the little witch was interesting but there certainly could be more. How would you get Spike and Buffy into this fic?
Don’t worry. It will be very Spuffy but with a certain amount of angst as well.
Robyn
02/23/2006 01:46 am
I like. More please.
Glad you liked it. Will write new chp soon.
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