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Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 3 The Biggest Bad
BecomingChosenGirl13
03/04/2008 08:51 pm
Grh argh!, they sent my review when i didn't press the button!:-S. Love Billy he's such a cutie! *mommy, when i grow up i want a baby just like him*. Hate Shanny, though. She's quite the Dawn!.
Sorry to hear you hate Shanny. I don't personally think she's another Dawn. She has serious parent conflicts, but then I think they are justified. I've never thought a child of Buffy and Spike would have an easy ride through life and this one is so "normal" it makes your teeth ache. Even Dawn was bright green energy to start with!
But Billy does grow on you, doesn't he. Although having little Joyce around might make life difficult!
But Billy does grow on you, doesn't he. Although having little Joyce around might make life difficult!
BecomingChosenGirl13
03/04/2008 08:46 pm
12/31/2006 07:31 pm
Billy's going to be a little devil, isn't he? Really like the twin characters.
12/22/2006 10:44 pm
It's so funny to see so many of their characteristics played out in their grandchildren. I feel bad for Shanny because she clearly lived a hard life, but even worse for the twins because it seems like they also have been exposed to things way past what they should know. I wonder how Spike and Buffy will respond to having such precocious children around.
08/28/2006 09:10 pm
After Kennedy had died in the first weeks of the European Demon War Could we have a flashback to savor that moment?
I knew it, Billy is a little devil.
I knew it, Billy is a little devil.
Verda
07/24/2006 02:40 am
Poor Joyce, thinking that she's bad, feeling isolated, if it wasn't for her brother, she'd have no one. At least she has her grandparent's. This is really good, I like the possiblities. Thanks for the read.
DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/11/2006 12:08 am
Good chapter.I think I hate Shanny.Billy is a teensy creepy.
Update soon.
Update soon.
04/01/2006 01:45 pm
Oh my god I like Billy :D
wulfie, everyone else thinks he’s creepy! Ah, yes, it’s you!
spikes slayer2
04/01/2006 12:15 pm
omg?! he is so creepy.. i fhe know all about it then why isnt he a 'powerful man-witch' (lol) himself?
spikes slayer2
04/01/2006 12:15 pm
omg?! he is so creepy.. i fhe know all about it then why isnt he a 'powerful man-witch' (lol) himself?
thanks for review. Just been able to get back on this page to answer people! Hope to post next chp in LJ soon and then on sites. All might be revealed, but then again, might take a couple more chpts!
04/01/2006 04:09 am
These twins are too clever by half. BTW, will we find out who Shanshu married? Is she married to someone "normal" who hates all the demons and witches and vampires? More story please.
04/01/2006 12:20 am
Woo hoo! This off to a rousing start. Is it new? Or just new to us?
Yes, brand new story. Meant to be a one off - the first chp can be read alone - but like most of mine, I gave in to pressure and decided to make it a long one!
04/01/2006 12:19 am
Hmm, getting interesting.
Wonder what's Billy's mettle? Don't you think Buffy's a tad young to have grandchildren that age? Was Shanny a teen when she had the twins? I'm jealous...56 3/4 and not a grandchild in the near future although my older son is finally engaged.
Wonder what's Billy's mettle? Don't you think Buffy's a tad young to have grandchildren that age? Was Shanny a teen when she had the twins? I'm jealous...56 3/4 and not a grandchild in the near future although my older son is finally engaged.
I worked out Buffy’s age very carefully. She’s about 47/48 during this story and yes, Shanny had the twins when she was very young, as you will see as the story progresses.
04/01/2006 12:08 am
Thanks for the fabulous update. It is so interesting learning about Buffy's and Spike's past, and the things that have brought them to where they are at. I am looking forward to learning more about Billy, particularly with that ending. :)
Thank you for reviewing and for following the story so closely. Perhaps their relationship with Shanny isn’t everything people would want, but I feel it is realistic.
vladt
03/31/2006 11:21 pm
shivers instead of concealed smiles from spike, not good. very informative update. thanks for the read.
Yes, I get worried too about Spike and Billy.
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