Ring of Fire by TalesofSpike
Chapter: Chapter 4:05

zanthinegirl
08/03/2010 04:35 am
So much love for Spike & Dawn in this chapter.  They have a complicated relationship and are both ruled primarily by their emotions.  It's why this rings true to me.  They *would* butt heads occasionally.  And honestly both of them have valid points. 

I'd forgotten how much I liked Brandon it takes guts to stand up to Spike on a tear!

06/13/2010 09:31 am
Can't say I blame Dawn honestly, though it looks like I'm alone in that sentiment lol. But they've only been back from LA a very short time and they've spent more time shagging each other than talking to her, so it's understandable she feels like a third wheel, and if she can't talk to her boyfriend who can she talk to? Just a shame the boyfriend has a big mouth.

08/23/2007 09:10 pm
OH that is not going to be good for Dawn
It could be worse. Like Buffy says, he's not angry any more.

Thanks, honey!

08/28/2006 04:23 am
The kids got a smart mouth on him doesn't he? Talking to Spike like that. Spike's the adult and soon-to-be head of household, who has more of a right to talk about Dawn's welfare and not a very recently new boyfriend. Can't wait to listen in on this conversation. Great read, thanks.
Lol! Well, they're both prepared to stick up for her, and I'm willing to bet Spike would have more respect for him doing that than if he went with the "Yes, sir", "No, sir," routine... In the long run at any rate. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Thank you!

07/16/2006 10:15 pm
oh spike...he should just listen...i like brandon, personally, even if his timing's not the greatest...this is gonna be a big explosion isn't it? :)
Thanks, honey!

You know Spike, he takes things to heart and he lashes out.

06/27/2006 06:27 pm
Oh uh now bit's in trouble - she pushed Spike to far! I thought SPike was behaving real well. Bloody teenagers!
Thanks, honey!

I suspect that Dawn really didn't expect Brandon to repeat what she said, but, yeah, the shit is about to hit the proverbial fan.

DeanSamWInchesterfan
04/19/2006 10:05 pm
Good story.I've read all of the "Spike's Will Be Done" stories on Vampire's Kiss,and it took me three days.I love these stories.I love the Dawn/Brandon pairing.I love all the pairings and all the characters.When are you updating "Angels and Demons"?
It's my favorite one so far.
I can't speak for when the story will be updated on VK. That depends on the archivist. I have just got chapter 8.02 back from my beta, but there are more extensive changes to be made than normal, so it might be tomorrow or possibly even the day after before it's updated at http://www.he-s-no-angel.net/002UT.htm.

Normally, I try to update about once a week. Lately, RL has been getting in the way and I don't know how long it'll be before I get back to a more regular schedule.

vladt
04/19/2006 07:24 am
very good read. not as explosive as i though spike would be and i don't think he will be to extreme with dawn. not for long ,at least. then again, i tend to err a lot. thanks for the enjoyment.
Thank you! I guess time (and the next chapter) will tell...

kim
04/19/2006 04:53 am
Ooooo, she's in trouble.......

Spike's going to laying down the brutal honesty cards, now.
Thanks! You know me sooo well...

04/19/2006 03:59 am
Uh oh! Dawn has been her usual whiny, it's everybody else's fault, otherwise I'd be really cool and nice. I hope Spike at least scares her a lot. I know teenagers are generally a pain in the ass (I was) but I wanted to have fun and sneak out of the house and generally be left alone by the adults. Whining was not cool. Rant over. More story please.
Thanks! I think I would be scared if I was on the receiving end of what Dawn has coming, but then deep down Dawn knows Spike wouldn't hurt her, so it sort of makes it easier on her.

I'm sure there'll be more soon.