Brave New World by JamesMFan
Chapter: Brave New World

02/06/2007 07:02 pm
Wow - what a start!

08/21/2006 12:38 am
Amazing! So completely original. Excited to find out what this is all about. Excellent beginning, can't wait to catch up. Thanks for the exciting read.

Isabel
06/19/2006 06:03 am
I love it when I first chapter makes me eager to read the rest of the story. Great start. I don't know why I haven't started reading this story before. The summary sounded interesting. I'm glad I gave it a try tonight.

05/21/2006 02:49 am
I am enjoying the premise of this first chapter - I can't wait to see what happens and why the police are arresting Buffy,

05/18/2006 03:42 am
No, listen, see – he was a vampire - That explanation always works. Poor Buffy, just when you thought it couldn't get any worse an Evil Writer comes along. Interesting start.

Nikkole
05/17/2006 11:06 pm
Hmmmmmm, interesting. I wonder what the heck happened in transit.

Nikkole
05/17/2006 11:06 pm
Hmmmmmm, interesting. I wonder what the heck happened in transit.

05/12/2006 01:08 am
Very intriguing - I like this first chapter and can't wait to see where you take this!

05/12/2006 01:08 am
Very intriguing - I like this first chapter and can't wait to see where you take this!

05/11/2006 09:44 pm
Whoa, you have me completely confused and engrossed.

05/09/2006 10:39 pm
whoa what happened? Totally fantastic first chapter. i'm hooked already.

Lilachigh
05/09/2006 06:14 pm
So pleased the writer’s block has been dissolved. Love the beginning of this one. I am hooked already.

05/09/2006 12:39 pm
OMG?!?! please update!!!!

N
05/09/2006 11:35 am
very interesting start, hope to see more of it soon.

05/09/2006 07:53 am
Weird! She's not in Sunnydale any more. More story please.

vladt
05/09/2006 06:43 am
great opening chapter. your past tales tell me this will be a wonderful read. thanks

05/09/2006 06:34 am
awesome start...cant wait to see where you take it from here

Richard
05/09/2006 04:22 am
OMG, this is AWESOME.

And a hearty thank you for pointing out that large numbers of people really do win over individuals.

kim
05/09/2006 03:43 am
Whoa...she ended up somewhere that vampires have become good guys...

Typical Buffy, though, act first and ask questions when everyone's dead.

Jess Marie
05/09/2006 03:20 am
This is one of the most original ideas I've read in forever. Really excited to see where it goes.

05/09/2006 02:26 am
OMG what the hell is going on! I love the beginning and cant wait to see where you go from here.