This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka
Chapter: Prologue: War Pigs

04/25/2007 02:57 am
Good start, on my way to read more of this story :)
Glad you liked it so far.

vladt
06/17/2006 07:42 am
"How could she have been so blind?" that is rhetorical? very good beginning, thanks for the read.

06/16/2006 07:35 pm
Wonderful start- Great narrative hook. I'm so gripped!

06/13/2006 07:06 am
interesting intro...wonder where you're going with this...can't wait to see :)
Thanks! I did post the first chapter at the same time as the prologue but it's not up yet. The second was just posted now. So hopefully they will show up. =)