These people are horrible! Geez, Kelly was just a little girl. I hope she didn't die from the blow to her head. And Tara's father is a first class asshole.

very good update, describing a very disturbing world (or parts of ours.) thanks for the fine read.

Ugh- how terrible! This world gets a little more devestating at every turn. These soldiers are inhumane at best :[ Fantastically gripping story.

oh how horrible...you have created a truly horrific yet fascinating world here...love reading this fic...!!! :)cant wait for more :)

Interesting world you've outlined here - can't wait to see more of it. Well done on some pretty enticing OCs as well (I'm especially interested in finding out Trey's backstory).