This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Children Of The Grave

06/21/2006 08:24 pm
So glad Willow and Oz found Kelly and she's not dead. Great story.

vladt
06/17/2006 07:20 pm
nice to see you brought kelly back, even if, sadly. thanks for the read.

06/16/2006 08:22 pm
Nice connection- very neat. And I love that you've tied Oz into the story too, though the willow part made me choke up a little. Can't wait to read more of this- it's incredible :]] Truly unique my dear.

Missus_grace
06/16/2006 06:47 pm
I just discovered this story and I'm glad I jumped in and started reading. Very interesting plot and backstories.

I can't wait to see the rebels crush the Initiative, but I'm sorry that Riley's already dead. I would have enjoyed watching Buffy beat on his traitorous a*s!

Pin
06/16/2006 02:22 pm
Another excellent chapter. I really like your new characters and the way you are placing all of the players on the board. Looking forward to more.
I'm really glad you are enjoying this story. Don't worry though, chapter eight has already been started. (228 words so far) ;)

06/16/2006 02:14 pm
oh wow...so kelly's all right!! awesome!!! you see, you've made me care so much about an oc you've only just introduced! you are an excellent writer, i can't believe i've never read your stuff before!! very very good story! :) can't wait for more
I just couldn't leave her. ;)
The last story I wrote,before posting here,was sometime in 2001/2002. I posted them to mailing list I'm on. After getting little to no responses I just quit. I couldn't even tell if they were being read. (btw-I really like that feature here)It took me awhile to get the nerve up to try again. I'm glad I did. =)