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Innocence Found by spikes_heart
Chapter: Future Imperfect
01/07/2014 05:47 am
I love this story - your treatment of Buffy and Spike as children was terrific. Like how your handled all of the characters.
Ooh yay sequel. Actually loved this. :-)
07/21/2010 03:37 am
04/21/2010 09:19 pm
Great story overall! Only part I didn't quite get was the end where Bufy freaked out and then they were suddenly playfighting..didn't understand what her prob was and nothing was explained so it kinda lacked something for me. Other than that I really loved the whole thing.
Jags
03/08/2010 10:52 pm
That was soooo awesome! And cute!
Niori
05/07/2009 06:09 am
This was an amazing story! Little Spike and Buffy was totally adorable, had me awwing all the time.
And though Willow is one of my fav characters, you totally had me wanting to smack her upside the head most of the story. Good job there.
And teh thing I liked most? The way you protrayed Angel. So many Spuffy stories have Angel as a complete jerk, so this was very refreshing. Angel all compassionate over little Spike was perfect. Again, great story and all that.
12/22/2007 04:20 pm
Oh that was good.
12/18/2006 10:04 pm
Great fic. Little Buffy and Spike were so cute!
11/25/2006 03:27 pm
Lovely story. Both Spike and Buffy were uber-cute as kids, and fit so good together, both as grown ups and as kids.
Stella
08/22/2006 11:09 pm
This has to be one of the best stories I've read period. I was reading this on my lunch break outside at work. When I came in, a co-worker asked me if I had found a funny story because she could hear me laughing inside. There were just so many scenes in this story that just made me crack up. You did a great job of taking Buffy's & Spike's personalities and molding them into 5 year olds. I can just see Buffy as she tells Spike that he's a "bampire." GREAT!!! :)
07/28/2006 05:20 pm
very sweet story I enjoyed it immensely
verda
07/13/2006 08:12 am
If I hadn't said it enough, I love this story and I'm so glad I looked at the sequel and was interested enough in it to read this first. Thank you once again for this amazingly entertaining story.
I've enjoyed your kind words for every chapter, hon. Seems I've done my job well in entertaining you. *smiles*
tg1982
07/11/2006 09:50 pm
Wow! What a fic! It was a riot. Thanx for the read.
You're very welcome - it was a lot of fun to write, too.
07/11/2006 09:01 pm
I love this story! I'm so glad you posted it here. It was so fun to read it again. I love little Buffy and Spike, and "bampire". :)
You've made me smile!
alexpallex
07/09/2006 10:03 pm
Wow! I love this fic! I'm so going to read the sequel! The only thing is, where the hell was Dawn when all of this happen? How did she disappear? I'm assuming she exists in this fic since Buffy jumped of the tower and everything. So yeah, that's the only thing I didn't like about this fic other than that it was awesome!
Nope - sorry, love. No Dawn. Not at all in this fic. Why did Buffy jump? don't have a clue, but not because of Dawn. My reasoning behind it is simply just because. I do have her in other fics, though. And I'm glad you liked the story inspite of the Dawn lackage.
Robyn
07/09/2006 03:38 am
Oh so good, I loved the Angel/Spike interaction and Angel's sad acceptance of Buffy and Spike as well as his realization that he now had a family again. I love how you portray Buffy and Spike’s relationship and the fun that is in it. I have really enjoyed this story and I am looking forward to the sequel. :)
I think Angel's isolation caused a lot of his problems and issues. A sense of family can insulate you against the worst that life has to offer. I hope you like what's in store for them all.
golddrake
07/09/2006 12:20 am
great story
Many thanks.
07/08/2006 09:36 pm
ewwww... Angel kissed Spike! Looking forward to the sequel.
They've got a long history together... I doubt it's the first time they kissed each other. *grins* Hope you like what's coming up.
Lou
07/08/2006 09:17 pm
That's a briliant chapter - the whole scene in the Hyperion particularly.
Thanks, Lou. It was difficult, in that it was a long time coming. An actual convo between Spike and Angel that didn't involve beating each other up.
07/08/2006 05:21 pm
wow! that story, the whole thing, was just incredible, hon...excellent job! i love how you portray spike's relationship with angel...very well done...and angel's reluctant acceptance of the situation...can't wait to read more! :)
**beams happily** Hope you enjoy the sequel as much.
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