Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 7 Power Play

12/31/2006 07:57 pm
Summers girls keeping up the birthday tradition.

12/22/2006 11:13 pm
They had better be real careful with a little boy that can read their minds in the house. it seems like there is some resentment between Buffy and Willow because Willow got to be a part of the twins lives, not to mention Shanny's, when Buffy and Spike were kicked out. Since it seems like Shanny didn't even know who the father of her children was I'm thinking they migh need to involve Angel if they want some real answers.

Robyn
08/30/2006 10:24 am
I loved the look at what was going on in Buffy’s head from Billy’s point of view and with his understanding of things. Great take on Willow and her actions. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it.

08/29/2006 06:54 am
lol an angel? lol hilarious!!

BerMH
08/29/2006 02:21 am
I love the concept of this story, and I can't wait for more!
Glad you’re enjoying the story. Hope to update very soon.

vladt
08/28/2006 11:43 pm
excellent read, thank you. red always was envious. david should have gone to jail, not a wedding. love "Why would Granny not want to think about an angel?" thanks, again for the fine tale.
I’ve been thinking about it, and of course in the year this is set, the laws might have changed!

08/28/2006 09:41 pm
What surprises me the most is that David had sex with a fifteen year old. What was a twenty year old doing dating her. It's not like he didn't know her age, she'd been with Willow's parents long enough to know how old she was. Some drunk demon I can understand, but David? No! Spike and Buffy sure have a lot to deal with and I can't even begin to imagine what they're going to do to help the twins and repair their relationship with their daughter. Thanks for the update. Great chapter, wonderful read.
Well, no one’s perfect and I think David just got carried away one night. Also think that Shanny “helped” him get carried away because she already knew she was pregnant. There is a strong streak of implacability in this girl - if there is such a word! But glad you’re enjoying the story.

08/28/2006 09:37 pm
Good take on envious Willow. This is a great story. Can't wait to see where you take it. Sharpen that pencil and get to work.
Thank you for all the reviews. Will try and update soon. It is red hot in my brain at the moment!

fallen_angel
08/28/2006 07:03 pm
Gonna tell us who he was? thanx for the enjoyable update.
We’re working towards it. Thanks for reading.

Fran
08/28/2006 05:14 pm
Admittedly Joyce scares me too. I wonder who the mystery guy was and hope that Shanny makes a real time appearance soon. I'd love to know more about her life. Good update.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated.