Cara Mia by Confused Muse
Chapter: Chapter One

11/06/2005 12:08 am
Uh, oh. The Immortal is up to something! Can't wait for next chapter!

ComedyofErrors
10/19/2005 06:14 am
I love Dawn taking charge like this. Poor Spike picked the wrong place to be drunk in. 'The first pressing' has an ominous ring to it. Great chapter.
I figured we'd seen her potential in Season 5 quite a lot, and the phrase "Little Bitty Buffy" stuck ;) The first pressing is actually a term for vineyards, it's the first harvest and wine-making of the season...there is ominous, but it's coming!

ComedyofErrors
10/04/2005 05:54 am
Oh yay! The site's back up and I can read these two marvelous new chapters. Wonderful confrontation between Buffy and Spike. Nothing is easy between them, definitely. Let's hope Andrew shows up shortly to straighten things out. Very interested in the plot the immortal is trying to inact. Evil manipulative fiend.
Thank you so much :) There was someone who didn't like the confrontation at all, so it's nice to know someone appreciates me ;)

Stephanie
09/24/2005 10:37 am
Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:39 am Great story need more... more Seriously, goo dstart... can't wait to see what happens next... I like SPike finding Dawn. It is logical and makes me wonder why he never bothered before. Now ... more!

Shadowsbabe
09/24/2005 10:36 am
Shadowsbabe 09/10/2005 @ 12:05 am Okay, I'm hooked. I love this. So glad you remembered to fix the Spike/Dawn relationship. It was too important to both of the charcters. I'm still mad they never had time to show this kind of scene before the end of season 7. Can't forgive those darn Potentials for stealing screen time from important relationship moments like this. Please be a fast updater. Please!!!!!!!!!

Tamara
09/24/2005 10:35 am
Tamara 09/09/2005 @ 07:44 am I can't wait to see his reaction to telling Buffy . Y'now I reslly have kink about Spike hardening his heart towards Buffy post TGIQ with her desperately persuing him. The hypocrisy of her being with the Immortal after all her going on about soulessness and normal really bothered me especially since thye left it so late in the verse.

redwulf
09/24/2005 10:35 am
redwulf50 09/08/2005 @ 09:49 pm Like Patti said us old folks need quick updates :P great fic so far :P

ComedyofErrors
09/24/2005 10:33 am
ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 07:54 pm Great Dawn reactions: hug then slap. I wonder what Buffy will do...

Gina
09/24/2005 10:33 am
Gina 09/08/2005 @ 07:30 am Awww. I love Spike/Dwan friendship! Hurry and make Buffy dump that poncey slime bucket!

Esther
09/24/2005 10:32 am
Esther 09/08/2005 @ 01:53 am Oh man, great beginning!! I'm hooked already! More...soon....please?

slaymesoftly
09/24/2005 10:31 am
Slaymesoftly 09/07/2005 @ 09:24 pm Great start! More soon I hope? Not nagging, just hoping. I'm old, you know, and I forget stuff if it's too long between chapters....lol

Tasha
09/24/2005 10:30 am
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/07/2005 @ 09:12 pm Nice start.

spike_spetslayer
09/24/2005 10:30 am
spike_spetslayer 09/07/2005 @ 03:01 pm Great start, CM--always wondered why Spike never looked Dawnie up when in Rome...keep going, sounds great