Brave New World by JamesMFan
Chapter: 2003 and Beyond!

charisse
04/19/2011 09:49 pm
GREAT line: "I guess I could just dance on you."  

And Spike runs scared. (teehee)

:-)
05/22/2010 05:11 pm
 

10/07/2006 05:59 am
loved the chapter, thank you. glad to see giles' narrowmindedness is secure in history. the “Balderdash,” paragraph is a joy. thanks, again.

Fran
10/03/2006 01:06 am
The more I think about it the more I may be inclined to side with Giles. I like to think that Spike (and Angel) are unique vampires that rose above their lot in (un)life to turn to the good side. I do, however, like the fact that Spike is being treated like a person so there is an upside. I can't wait for the next chapter for the Spuffy dance or "dance."

sirc
10/02/2006 07:51 pm
Loved it

Nikkole
10/02/2006 06:49 pm
I like the whole talking room concept! It was a very good way to give us a run down of the last 30 years, without taking up to much story time, you know? I still hope to get some more details, but I am really liking the layout of the story.

akarinacj
10/02/2006 01:16 pm
Great chapter, as usual. Please update soon

Lou
10/02/2006 11:40 am
A step in the right direction !

Robyn
10/02/2006 08:39 am
The history lesson was very interesting. I loved how Buffy got Spike to dance. Thanks so much for the update, I really enjoyed it.

kim
10/02/2006 04:28 am
This whole "new world" is creeping me out, too.

10/02/2006 02:28 am
I like Zoe idea, if they convict her turn her, make her his for eternity. So they're back to where it all began. Him watching her dance, this time he can feel her dancing, touching him, rubbing her body up and down him. Grinding herself into him and then after they have the house all to themselves. It's ch.23. we do need some Spuffy lovin'. Great way for her to catch up on what's happened in the last 30 years. Wonderful chapter. Thanks JMF.

10/01/2006 10:23 pm
the look at the time she missed was very interesting...and i'm with buffy...spike needs to wake up and see that his life just suddenly got a lot better....now that she's back and she's treating him right...*and* he's a legitimate member of society...what's he got to be so down about?
but then...it's all gotta be kinda hard to adjust to, doesn't it?
great chapter, pet, looking forward to more

10/01/2006 09:50 pm
hehehe. there is a part of me that really really wants buffy to get back to her own time. I do NOT like this whole vampires are like people and should have rights and stuff. It's not fair for Buffy. Also I hate the sanitized way slaying has come about. It's not you or your story, I just don't like the circumstances.

10/01/2006 09:50 pm
hehehe. there is a part of me that really really wants buffy to get back to her own time. I do NOT like this whole vampires are like people and should have rights and stuff. It's not fair for Buffy. Also I hate the sanitized way slaying has come about. It's not you or your story, I just don't like the circumstances.

fallen_angel
10/01/2006 08:49 pm
"They couldn't get enough of the damn moon." Loved this line.

Cas
10/01/2006 06:50 pm
Loved the hologram museum, but the techno club rules.

10/01/2006 06:01 pm
How wrong is it that I love the idea of Giles being seen by history as another Hitler