Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: A doubtful choice

01/04/2008 06:29 am
Doing a small reading again of this last parts - I really enjoyed having Lawson and all the different vampire as part of the story - great to have new characters and I always liked Lawson. In the series I thought his story, more developed would have been very interesting.

06/13/2007 10:40 pm
Wow, what a choice to make.

01/13/2007 04:16 am
There's no guarantee's that Willow will stop trying to control thing's, besides they have Conner now. So I'd choose Spike and my family. Heaven can wait. How wonderful for Lawson after sixty years of being alone, to have a feeling of family again. This rescue will give them a chance to bound. One more to go, great chapter, thanks.

meg
01/11/2007 05:45 pm
also? i would totally choose spike.

meg
01/11/2007 05:44 pm
i absolutely love this story. i got hooked with origins when i was lookin at spuffy award winners lookin for something to read. i've been obsessed ever since. i really really hope that you're still working on this. i always run into WIP's that are amazing but people have abandoned as they lose intrest in buffy. please please please tell me you're still into this.
i anxiously await your next chapter. hahaha. let me know if there's anything i can do to help you through your writers block.

Kawaki
01/04/2007 06:22 pm
I'm back. Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I had a baby in Oct. I love this story and I totally understand how real life can be utterly consuming..

miranda82
01/03/2007 03:16 am
I just re-read this story again because I enjoyed it so much the first time! :D

Just a question...I didn't really get how Kirsten could have an older brother when she was born in 2002? (or did I get that mixed up?)

12/14/2006 12:27 am
wonderful read, as always. thank you. not so evil a cliffie. you know she is going back to spike, else he will be there,dragging her and the baby back.

kathleen
12/13/2006 11:53 pm
damn! you are good! talk about leaving us with a cliffhanger! as always, you never let me down when it comes to great storytelling. thanks and keep up the good work. i'll be waiting for the next chapter with baited breath!!!

sirc
12/11/2006 10:11 pm
Loved it :D

Hannah
12/11/2006 06:24 am
Ah! No! You can't stop there! I have become so addicted to this story; you're really an amazing writer. Here's to hoping your writer's block leaves soon!

Kimberly
12/09/2006 06:57 pm
I can't wait till you update this some more. I have so enjoyed this story. I wonder what buffy will decide and that is a cliffhanger!

12/09/2006 06:43 am
oh man...what a choice they're giving her!! how hard that has to be! hope spike can help connor in time..excellent chapter :)

ahigh
12/08/2006 10:05 pm
Wonderful chapter with no sign of drek anywhere. I'm glad you seem to be pushing through your block because I love your stories and have never been anything but astounded by your writing. Can't wait to see more.

Weaver
12/08/2006 03:50 pm
Oooh - just read the last 10 chapters and ended on this cliff hanger!!!!

More please - you write beautifully.

Lou
12/08/2006 02:01 pm
Thank you for another excellent chapter. Decisions, decisions. Turn back time or not? Can't wait for more.

Dar
12/08/2006 11:17 am
I liked the definition of betrayal. What a choice to lay down your burden and just wait for Spike to join you. Naw, Buffy's hands on kind of girl (Life and Spike). Nice Chapter

12/08/2006 08:56 am
I'd choose waiting with Spike. The price was already paid. For what it's worth, this chapter was drek-free. That's the hardest part about a block--no matter how good someone tells you something is, all you see are the mistakes that you just can't seem to fix.

12/08/2006 07:45 am
Heaven.

Or Spike. . . .


Okay, now that? Is one hell of a choice. Are you sure you're not like EVOL???

pretty_in_fangs
12/08/2006 05:57 am
Of course, she hasn't asked what her choices would be if she does forgive Willow, I notice.

And, by the by, I don't believe that anything that you write could ever by drek. I've certainly never seen any signs of it.

Jamie
12/08/2006 05:39 am
Great update, and of course the answer would be Spike every time

12/08/2006 05:26 am
wow glad to know buffy/spike get to be together always, but buffy has a really hard choice to make now :)
can't wait for another update.

12/08/2006 05:05 am
SPIKE! I'd choose Spike

LeeAnne
12/08/2006 04:41 am
I think I would choose Heaven on earth which would be Spike of course! Knowing that I would be welcomed later might do much to ease my mind especially considering if I were Buffy and getting some of that "normal" she so coveted with having a family and getting to live long enough to enjoy that family. I was so excited to see you updated this story. I read each and every chapter and usually I tend to wait until the last chapter and review the whole story but I thought you might could use a note telling you how wonderful and amazing I think your writing talent is. I am so stunned sometimes at how good and well written your story is. I can say that there hasn't been anything in this story that I haven't enjoyed reading. I hope we get to see some more of it soon.