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Check Point by Xela 01/21/2007 04:32 am Love Buffy and Spike. Very fun chapter. Anya was hysterical with her finger games and poor Dawn must be ready to gag. ha, yeah, Anya...she's always a trip. And Dawn is handling the situation MUCH better than I would have. 01/19/2007 11:42 pm oh wow...that's so intense..and very sweet and adorable...they're all reverting to form rather quickly, aren't they? :) Had to get the smut in there somehow ;) And hey, when you're a teenager with slight memory loss, what else are you going to do?? 01/15/2007 07:22 pm I am so hoping they all remember everything that happens from here on until they get their memories back! Very funny, thanks for writing! :) If they didn't, that would ruin all the good sex, you know? ;) 01/15/2007 03:57 pm Well who knew that mentally turning them into teenagers would bring about such rampant hormones. You have to love Dawn just taking things in stride when she isn't messing with people. Poor girl is going to be left alone downstairs while everyone is hooking up. How priceless is Anya and her ability to get her point across even with the language barrier! So I wonder how Dawn will save the day in this situation....other than allowing them to work off their hormones I actually made myself laugh when I was vizualizing how Anya would deal with a language barrier. So I'm glad you're enjoying it too!! Cas 01/15/2007 03:14 pm What an interesting mix in Spike. And Dawn just sitting back and watching it all happen. Hilarious! (also a few typos mid read you might want to fix - like rang instead of ran). I always thought Dawn was an underused character; they just turned her into a whiney pissant when she had so much potential. Thanks. LadyYashka 01/15/2007 01:26 pm This story is great! I can't wait for more! :) Thanks! 01/15/2007 12:24 pm hahaha... aww they're sharing their first time! and OMG what is everyone doing having sex when they should be figuring out whats wrong!! tsk tsk... lol Well, to be fair...they're teenagers. Who cares what's wrong when you're a teenager? ;) | |||
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