Chirality by yutamiyu
Chapter: VIII

01/28/2007 09:41 pm
This is fantastic. I loved the way you have taken canon and turned it around, but kept echoes of the original story. I particulary loved it that you had Spike thinking that he's come back "wrong". And that closing line was perfect. This is such a well-written, innovative fic. I can't wait to read more. And just in case that hint was too gentle, I'll come right out and beg you to hurry up and update soon. Please!
::grin:: Don't worry; putting the final touches and edits on chapter nine, and I'll be posting it later tonight!

DeanSamWinchesterfan
01/27/2007 05:52 pm
Good chapter.Update soon.Poor Spike,not knowing what to do.At least Buffy and Spike are in California,and not Pennsylvania,
where it's been snowing since Sunday and will continue to snow until Friday.
Eep! I guess that snowstorm has made it all the way east...my family lives in the Midwest, so it was pretty bad for them for a week or two. Hope you fare better than the Midwest did!

01/27/2007 09:17 am
Just read this from the beginning. I like it.
Buffy is being Buffy - repressing until she breaks. I do like the changes you have made - she's taking responsibility, working at the Magic Box instead of the Doublemeat. Bleeding herself to make a snack for Spike.
That he came back when she finally cried for him, admitted he was truly gone, was interesting
I can't wait to see where you take it.
The whole thesis of this story is that little changes (well, and one big one; another person jumps) can completely change the future. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

01/27/2007 03:29 am
very good read, thank you. eagerly awaitng both the answer to spike's question and his reaction to a mug of slayer's blood.
::grin:: I hope to update soon!

PyroChilde
01/26/2007 07:34 pm
No! No leaving it like this! C'mon, torturing the good little readers just isn't nice :(

Very good chapter! I loved it!! Great work!!
I don't mean to torture; I'm sorry! I'll update soon, I promise!

kim adams
01/26/2007 07:01 pm
just read the story straight thru and loved it. I have a hard time stopping for reviews when i get involved...sorry...but this is a fantastic story and I love the reversal of roles...can't wait till Xander finds out...lol
Great story and I promise to review each chapter from now on...
Oh, Xander. I still have to figure out what to do with him. Maybe I should just send him on a really long vacation for the duration of the fic. :P Glad you're enjoying the story!

Lou
01/26/2007 02:33 pm
Suitably tentative reunion .. wait till Spike notice the difference in Buffy's attitude to him!
::grin:: Glad you like it!

01/26/2007 10:45 am
Yeah, does he still have the chip? Don't know why he'd be worried about it though. It's not like he's going to go and start feeding on the populace again. Weird that she feels that way about him now. Can't wait to see what's going on. Thanks for letting her find him. Wonderful chapter, thanks for the update.
You'll find out soon, I promise! And you're right about Spike not going out and feeding on the populace, but to be fair, I think he's still pretty disoriented by the fact that he died, and is now back.

01/26/2007 08:40 am
Love it, love it. Wonderful awkwardness, and the return of a naked Spike. The reverse of roles is wonderfully refreshing sometimes. I can't wait to see future chapters.
Future chapters are definitely in queue in the near future! And naked Spike is always good. ;P Thanks for reading!

01/26/2007 06:21 am
I'm wondering what's wrong with Spike, and if Buffy will tell him she loves him.
Great chapter.
You'll have to wait and see. ;P Thanks for reading!

01/26/2007 05:59 am
Beautiful chapter
Thanks!

Stacy
01/26/2007 05:27 am
Awesome! Thanks for writing.
Thanks!

Katina
01/26/2007 05:10 am
Cue the angst. I loved the ending of this chapter
Oh, the angst. Thanks!

01/26/2007 04:30 am
Wonderful update! I'm still loving this fic. Thank you.
You're very welcome! Glad you're still enjoying it.

01/26/2007 03:53 am
Well done!
Love the story...curious to know what is exactly "wrong" with Spike. Please update soon!
We'll find out soon, I promise!

01/26/2007 02:36 am
Ah, lovely update. Thank you for continuing.
I couldn't stop writing this even if I wanted to. :P Thanks for reading!

LadyYaska
01/26/2007 02:33 am
Poor Spike. He's so confused and Buffy isn't handling his return any better than he is. I can't wait to see how you end up answering his question. :)
I think things will be awkward for a bit as we find out where Spike has been and why exactly he's back. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story!

Tash
01/26/2007 01:42 am
Wow, wow and wow.

I really loved this story. I had often thought of a Spike jumping instead story but I don't think I had as yet read one. It's fantastic!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope you post it soon.
I hope to post it soon. I've started the next chapter, so we'll see how quickly I can get it done.

01/26/2007 01:36 am
oh wow...that was very beautifully written, and i'm wondering that very question myself...wonder also if he'll recognize that it's her blood, and how he'll react...another excellent chapter, love :)
The blood and the question will be revisited. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!

jess2357
01/26/2007 01:00 am
Yay again! Wonderful chapter - hope this helps the muse as I'm desperate to see where this goes! Thanks for writing.
My muse is fickle, but she's been nice lately, so hopefully the nice streak will stick around. :P

pretty_in_fangs
01/26/2007 12:41 am
Yay! I had just read somethin horribly depressing, and the new chapter of Chirality ensured that I now won't go to my class with tears in my eyes. Thank you.
Reading an update to a WIP right before a class is a great feeling; believe me, I've had my share. :) Glad I could help!

01/26/2007 12:36 am
Why on earth would she think he'd still have the chip after dusting?

Lovely chapter, I'm glad he never went to hell. Unless demons like hell, it might be their heaven. Who's to know?

Quiet Spike is a bit worrying but his memories are back so that's good news. Yay for new chapter.
I think sometimes logic just needs to take a break. She'll find out soon, though. And I'll definitely be revisiting Spike's odd quietness soon. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

01/26/2007 12:21 am
Oh I really love this story! I definatly need an update soon!
I hope to soon! I've started working on the next chapter, so hopefully it will be finished shortly.