Forward to Time Past by Unbridled_Brunette
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Two

sirc
03/07/2007 05:25 pm
Loved it :D

03/01/2007 06:03 am
"Restraint,"your doing a fine job, buffy. fine read, thank you.

Sandi
02/05/2007 03:52 pm
This story is beautifully written, and I find the relationship between William and Buffy intensely erotic, though there has been almost no sex. I vote for dusting Drusilla and leaving Buffy in 1880 with William, slowly releasing him from his inhibitions. Can't wait for the next chapter!

02/03/2007 08:17 pm
Oh come on, I need more. This is too good to have to stop here.

Cas
02/03/2007 02:13 pm
Really, you would think Buffy would try to fit herself to expectations beter.

02/03/2007 10:35 am
Oh, poor William!

02/03/2007 06:46 am
You actually found another way to torture Spike. I have to bow down to your genius. Didn't think there was any other way to torture him but you figured out how to do it. For a first fantasy, it was a good one. Maybe next time he'll try that in bed instead of while standing. Was hoping that she might have admitted that she was raped, still don't know how she will get around the fact that she's not a virgin any more. Not unless it's not an issue. That's the only thing I can come up with. Great fic, you know I love it.

02/03/2007 03:42 am
"The ache had become a need so powerful he felt almost maddened by it." And the UST in this story is KILLING me! I don't read too much smutty fic, but I have read a fair share. You manage to convey more lustful feelings in a chaste kiss and an aluded-to handjob than most people do in a purely pornographic fic. I can almost hear the Barry White music in the background. :smooch:

02/02/2007 11:12 pm
Wonderful chapter. Worth waiting for, although I thought I might have to check into Buffy rehab. Interesting parts with Mom. Maybe she's the real reason that William hasn't gotten married. And, exactly what is William waiting for? The sooner he gets that ring on her finger, the better.

02/02/2007 07:33 pm
awesome sooo glad your back!!!cant wait for the next chapter!!!i hope he gets turned soon!!

02/02/2007 06:53 pm
Love the chapter. And I know that Anne is just trying to help as all mother's should but this is something that Buffy and William have to figure out. And I am so glad that he was really that concerned about her. I am surprised that he didn't put 2 and 2 together to realize that it was the same night he had that awful feeling that she was in danger and needed him. And the fantasy was just too much.

Jen
02/02/2007 05:35 pm
This fiction is a real page turner. It has an original plot, passion, suspence, and is well written too. I feel the need to encourage.

I do not know etiquette of nominating an author for various awards. May I nominate you?
Of course, you may! I'm very flattered that you should ask. Thank you very much. :)

02/02/2007 03:47 pm
Poor, genteel fish-out-of-water William. I truly love this character. Buffy is going to make his head explode. I'm afraid Anne is going to withdraw her support if she continues to forget her "place". Thank you for the new chapter--I really needed a dose of William.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, nightshift. Thank you. :)

02/02/2007 01:25 pm
Poor pent-up William
Victorian through and through, isn't he?

Or maybe not...

;)

Onyx
02/02/2007 08:04 am
Wooooooaaaahhh....
I wish Buffy could just tell him the truth. He seems like he would enjoy such a fanciful tale, and all she would have to do would be to do something all superhero strong.
I liked this chapter a lot, and I cannot WAIT until the next one. I want to see where they go from here.

Es muy bueno! SPECTACULARRRRR!
Gracias, Onyx. ;)

02/02/2007 08:00 am
You were born in a repressed era, William, that's what's wrong with you. Oh, oops, now I'm talking directly to the characters. Sorry, UB! This story keeps getting more and more interesting! Thanks for updating!
Don't worry, LindsayH, as long as he doesn't start talking back then you're fine. ;)

Thanks for the review!

LadyYashka
02/02/2007 06:30 am
Poor William! He's got a 21 century girlfriend and he' stuck with Victorian society. :::wants to hug William::: Can I take him home please? I'll be good to him promise! :)
You'd be TOO good to him. I'd get him back all worldly-wise and then what on earth kind of good would he be to me?

Thanks for the review. :P

Esther
02/02/2007 06:13 am
Wonderful chapter!! Oh, I love the conflicting emotions that William's having about his desires and whether they're wrong or not. And his reaction to his mother's advice was fantab. Btw, that fantasy was HOT!! Can't wait for more!
lol. I'm glad you thought so, Esther. Thank you for reviewing. :)

02/02/2007 05:45 am
This is such a wonderful story, touching and beautifully written. At this point, I'm in favor of the "scourge" being taken out and Buffy remaining with William in 1880. Looking forward to your next update--hope its soon.
Thanks so much, SanityFair. I'm glad you're enjoying it.