Among the Living by msclawdia
Chapter: Chapter Two

All ofthe good :-)
06/08/2010 04:36 am
 

nmcil
04/18/2007 04:12 pm
I just started reading this and I am happily hooked - This reads like it is going to be a really nice piece of work -

Thank you! Welcome to the story.

02/27/2007 12:40 am
very good read, thank you. need more answers, please.

Thanks! More answers to come, I promise.

mr.chaos
02/26/2007 03:14 pm
Why do I get the feeling Willow is now a Big Bad, and her 'work' is trying to open the hellmouth and such?

There will be more on Willow in the next chapter, and that will be far from the last we see of her in this story.

dj
02/26/2007 03:36 am
really liked it, a little different from some of the coming back from the dead stories, like the different ones keep up the updates, looking forward to them

Thanks! The next chapter should be up soon.

Cas
02/25/2007 10:47 pm
Loved the line about Xander and his two wives! Agree that the story is better than the summary - I'm not usually a fan of future fics.

Thanks! I think I may have to come up with a better summary :) Next chapter is with the beta now.

Kim Adams
02/25/2007 08:12 pm
Just finished this story and wow what an interesting arc- I want to know more about Willow and what really happended to her. You have truly piqued my curiosity and I am definitely wanting more of this! She doesn't seem as damaged by coming back though, is that good or bad?

Thanks for reading and reviewing! There will be much more about Willow in the next chapter. And we haven't seen the full effects of Buffy's rise from the grave yet... :)

02/25/2007 07:12 pm
Oh much better than i thought it would be from the summary! I like it please continue

Thanks! I was worried that the summary was a little lame. Glad you decided to give it a try anyway.

ct114
02/25/2007 02:56 pm
Hmmmm...... vengence demon anyone??? That is what I think Willow is now. Overall I like this story and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Possibly... Glad you're enjoying it!

Aeryn
02/25/2007 10:41 am
Good start, wondering what has willow been up to and what other changes Buffy will discover.
keen for the next chapter

Thanks for reading! More revelations to come in the next chapter.

02/25/2007 08:36 am
Wow, things have changed!See didn't see Dawn and Giles after they pasted? Are you going to explain what happened to Dawn? Does Spike work for the Council now since he's Tashi's teacher? Not a vampire but with heightened sense? What's with Willow any way? Can't wait to see the answers to all of my questions. Really glad that she's so comfortable around Spike. This has to be hardest for him. Xander moved on and married twice and has a son. Did Spike find someone else too or has Buffy been irreplaceable? Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks MC, excellent as usual.

Buffy and Spike will talk about Dawn next chapter, and more history will be filled in. Spike hasn't been alone for thirty years (as I hinted in the first chapter), but he never really got over Buffy either.

SpaceLord
02/25/2007 07:18 am
Well interesting start, there are a lot of stories to be told in this one. 30 years of events and people changing in that time. Should be good.

Thanks! I'm going to try to fill in the backstory without boring everyone.

02/25/2007 05:59 am
I'm totally loving this story so far. Keep writing MC!

Thanks!

Atterb
02/25/2007 04:17 am
So far the only hole is why the heck she rose when she did. But I trust you'll explain that in later chapters.

Interesting story so far. I'm curious as to what happened to Willow. Vengeance demon, perhaps? And why did Spike get a soul? What happened to Dawn?

Please continue!

Thanks for all the feedback! Spike's soul will come up again soon, and Dawn will get explained next chapter.

Buffy's return will remain a mystery for a while, but eventually will be explained.

time of change
02/25/2007 04:05 am
This is wonderful! You are setting the scene really well for a Willow disaster.

Thanks! Details of Willow's rampage will come soon (after all, Buffy's not going to let everyone keep putting her off forever).

02/25/2007 03:34 am
This one was good as well, though I do have one question. Is Dawn dead or just not in Sunnydale? In the first chapter you mentioned she went to live with her Dad. Then in this one she gets paired with Giles in the deceased category, but you really didn't explain if she was dead or not. (unless I missed something)

Either way it was a very good chapter and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story. :)

Thanks for the feedback!

Dawn is dead. She went to live with Hank after Buffy died, but lots of stuff happened in 30 years. She died a few months before Buffy was resurrected. Buffy and the readers will be getting the details in the next chapter.

02/25/2007 12:47 am
Off to an interesting start. It's hard not to compare it to the other two "Buffy comes back after 20-30 years fics" currently out there, but I assume you will be going in a different direction from either of those. Curious as to who Katya is and what Spike's relationship with her is. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

(tiny voice) the fourth paragraph might have atypo in it - did you mean to say a little bitof a challenge rather than a little of a challenge?
Thanks for the typo snag. I didn't realize that there were a lot of current fics like this! I did see one posted somewhere that was *80* years later, which got me thinking 'what if it was a long time, but short enough that some of the old gang would still be around'.

More about everyone's pasts to come... Hope you'll stay tuned.

Nell
02/25/2007 12:23 am
PS Having read the other reviews, I thought I should say that I got Buffy's mirror joke.

Good! Thanks :)

Nell
02/25/2007 12:19 am
Just wanted to let you know - keep up the good work! I'm usually not into umpteen-years-later-Buffy-finds-the-world -changed fics, but you're keeping everyone believable. I'm intrigued by your Spuffy dynamic and curious about what would make Spike get a soul when Buffy's _not_ around.

Thanks! I didn't realize it was a genre, but I'm finding out now that it is :)

carole
02/24/2007 11:18 pm
i'm really liking this so far. can't wait for more.

Thanks! I'm getting close to done with my draft for chap three.

02/24/2007 11:10 pm
Looks interesting. I'm looking for a fill-in on Giles and Dawn, too.

There will be more on Dawn and Giles soon. Thanks for reading!

02/24/2007 08:26 pm
So no reflection, super senses and a heartbeat? Ok. Xander got married twice. Who was the first girl? Update soon plz.

The no reflection thing was apparently poor writing on my part. It was meant to be a metaphor. She couldn't see her reflection through the condensation, and it went nicely with the other stuff where her senses are overloading now that she has senses again.

The first wife was Anya. The second we haven't met yet :) Hope you'll keep reading! Thanks for the feedback.

Susie
02/24/2007 08:15 pm
This is quite good--you have laid out a nice foundation for the story by introducing all of the players and history quickly but complete manner. At first I thought that the story might just be a rehash of others with a similar premise but it is actually unique. I like it, and I'm looking forward to your next update which I hope is soon :-).

Thanks. I actually considered not doing this because I knew it had been done before, but I wanted to give it a shot. Glad you're enjoying it so far!

smlcspike
02/24/2007 07:09 pm
loved the story on how she thinks she is a Vampire and the questions she asked Spike.

She doesn't really think she's a vampire. She just couldn't see herself through the condensation on the glass. She was just joking with Spike. Looks like I should have written that better, because a few people have commented...

So glad you liked the story so far.

02/24/2007 06:18 pm
Yeh with the returning perkyness! What's the back story on Tashi? You mentioned Spike is her teacher. Is he a Council employee now?

Glad you're enjoying it! Tashi will get more screen time soon, and hopefully both of those questions will get answered.

02/24/2007 06:11 pm
I am looking forward to reading!

Thanks!

02/24/2007 05:50 pm
Huh. Okay, you've got me. I'm incredibly curious about why Buffy's back, why Willow's such a big secret and how the Council ended up being Slayer-friendly - and, of course, why Spike got his soul if Buffy was gone ...

And Buffy doesn't have a reflection? Now that's gotta drive her crazy.

Waiting on chapter three, eagerly!

Ack! Apparently I didn't write very clearly. I meant that Buffy couldn't see herself through the condensation, and then joked about it. It was meant to be a metaphor. Oops :)

All questions will be answered in time, I promise :) Thanks for reading!

Tamara
02/24/2007 05:31 pm
Definitely liking this story. Looks like Xander and Willow managed toscrew up thier relationships with Anya and Tara without Buffy coming back. Plus something happened that estranged Xander and Willow from each other.

Thanks! What happened with Willow will be revealed in time, I promise. And the Xander/Anya split is about to get explained when I introduce Jess.

Pin
02/24/2007 05:10 pm
This looks really good. I like the way you've formed the future for them. Thanks!

Thank you. I made sure to get an outline laid out, so hopefully I don't contradict myself down the line.