My absolute favorite chapter so far, just so you know. Very touching, love how they get to explore one another in this. And very realistic, too. I love this story!

Loved it :D

buffy did make it better! surprise, surprise. very fine read, thank you. nice (or evil) touch at the end.

Promised you a longer review:

Finally,*I* was beginning to get frustrated from William and Buffy's UST. I think that you made a good decision by not making the scene completely pornographic. It fits the general romantic/sensual tone of the story. Buffy can be incredibly thick when it comes to knowing what she wants when it comes to men. Usually, I think she struggles between being the Slayer and being a girl. Buffy doesn't hesitate too much with William, but I think that that fits the story: Buffy's been removed from her life as the Slayer, and she starts making decisions as just a girl in love without having to worry about if the world will end because of it :)

Oooh!....I think I just got a chill! UB, you are very likely to be the devil....

Oh, no! Of course it *would* be a bad omen ... can't wait for the next chapter!

Poor William sorely needed that --as did Buffy! Nice touch of foreboding.

Buffy actually made it right--that poetry spouting hussy. I love the so very Victorian assumption he made--that she would *have* to marry him. Now, of course, is where everything falls to pieces. It has to with foreshadowing like that.

Beatiful chapter. Just please....let them have some more time together. They definitely need the joy of planning a wedding and some more loving nights. Glad that you mentioned Spike in this chapter. It seems that our dear Buffy was paying attention to Spike's physique back in old SunnyD...*WEG*

This was good! It was sweet and lovely! To bad William had to get sick after losing his virginity. I just love this chapter! I can't wait to see what you've got planned next! :D

Great chapter. Only time for a quick note right now, but I'll write more later.

Great chapter. Only time for a quick note right now, but I'll write more later.

Ominous!

Still really enjoying this.

Go Buffy and get your man. I am so glad that she got through to him and he asked her to stay. And she didn't just jump at the chance to sleep with him but tried to make sure this was what he wanted. I just can't wait for the next installment.. Love it..

I cried like a baby over the last two chapters. Just thought you'd want to know. Saying I love this story is like saying Shakespeare is a good writer. Please ease the angst of my mind and update soon!! Oh, and don't think I missed that little bit of foreshadowing, UB!!

Whew - I thought I was going to faint. That was so beautifully romantic and now you're going to rip William's heart out, aren't you?

Sighs.

*sigh* Reads and rereads...maybe one more time...

Excellent chapter! This is a bad omen for him, that was great! Thanks for having her stay so he didn't think it was a dream. I'm hoping that you're letting her stay with him a little while longer. Will she be wearing his bracelet while she goes back home? It would prove to him that she was real. Thanks for this wonderful fic.

Lovely and passionate and so foreboding. This can't end well.

Bad omen indeed. Poor sweet William who has tasted heaven to fear the fall. Lovely update.

Kathleen

Have just caught up on your wonderful story. I love it... just beautiful! I love your William, so sweet and shy and yet with so much of the vampire we know and love already there just below the surface.

*chews fingernails* With a sense of impending doom, I look forward to seeing where you go from here!

I think you just like to torture us.
That was wonderful...up til that ending!

Beautiful chapter! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next!

Well....it happened better than I expected. And I was all ready to be relieved, and then you get ominous with that last sentence!! Evil writer, you! No bad omens when our pair is finally engaged!

Oooh, freaky ending. I've loved the last three or so chapters, this is my favourite fic, and has been since you started it.