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More Than A Myth by KaylaTM
Chapter: Catalyst
03/18/2007 06:09 pm
Love Buffy's dad, he's such a jerk. Not sure Buffy could let go of him so easy at aged 17.
What I was trying to do with Hank's character was to get the readers to idenify with what a typical split family would be like and how it always effects the child the most. Hank, as a parent who hasn't been there for most of Buffy's childhood, doesn't have a clue on what to do with Buffy, who is a teenager with problems. And when Buffy realizes that, she drastically decides to cut him out of her life because of the fact that she is young and thinks in 'forevers.'
03/09/2007 09:09 pm
what a lovely bedtime story. fun read, thank you.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
03/08/2007 10:46 pm
Oh I really like the start of this one.
Little Buffy with Joyce was so cute :-D
Grown up Buffy doesn't have it easy in life with Hank. Hence the saving of the money I guess. Looking forward to see if she likes Sunnydale.
Little Buffy with Joyce was so cute :-D
Grown up Buffy doesn't have it easy in life with Hank. Hence the saving of the money I guess. Looking forward to see if she likes Sunnydale.
I think I had the most fun writing the little Buffy and Joyce scene. I wanted something light and cute before all of the drama and angst.
You know? I hope Buffy likes Sunnydale too... But there's going to be a few (or a lot) of problems before then.
You know? I hope Buffy likes Sunnydale too... But there's going to be a few (or a lot) of problems before then.
Jessica
03/07/2007 06:40 pm
Great start so far. And I loved the bedtime story. She had an excellent take on everything. ; ) Things like "a huge group of vampires jumped out at her and started being really mean!†and "Vampires are big meanies with cooties! That’s why they wear red lipstick and slobber it all over your neck!†had me cracking up. Looking forward to where you are going to take this. And of course meeting Spike.
Yeah, I thought using the words 'really mean' and 'big meanies with cooties' represented the dialect of a six-year-old quite nicely.
Thank you for reviewing! It means a lot to me to know that you like it so far.
Thank you for reviewing! It means a lot to me to know that you like it so far.
03/07/2007 03:43 pm
Well, isn't this a different piece of pie? Wow! Quite a mystery to be solved. Is Spike a vampire here or human like Buffy? He did attend the funeral and they're never at night. Facinating story. Looking forward to learn it's secrets. Excellent start.
This is a weird one isn't it? When I started writing this I was like, "Um... Where the hell did that come from?" But the idea stuck...so I stayed with it.
And just to throw another loose cannon your way, whether or not Spike is a vampire isn't going to be the biggest mystery to be solved...there's more. LOL
And just to throw another loose cannon your way, whether or not Spike is a vampire isn't going to be the biggest mystery to be solved...there's more. LOL
Lea
03/07/2007 02:09 pm
Great beginning! I usually don't read 'normal-human' Buffy and 'vampire' Spike, but this seems to be more than meets the eye! Keep up the good work!
I'm glad that I could get you to read something a little different! I hope it continues to hold your interest as the story unfolds.
jen
03/07/2007 08:28 am
This looks to be really interesting. Looking forward to more.
Thank you for the review!
And I hope that it stays interesting as the story goes on!
*fingers crossed*
And I hope that it stays interesting as the story goes on!
*fingers crossed*
03/07/2007 03:09 am
Little Buffy is very much like big Buffy. Love the misused words.
The pale knight couldn't go in the sunlight, huh? Can't wait to see what happens.
The pale knight couldn't go in the sunlight, huh? Can't wait to see what happens.
03/07/2007 03:09 am
Little Buffy is very much like big Buffy. Love the misused words.
The pale knight couldn't go in the sunlight, huh? Can't wait to see what happens.
The pale knight couldn't go in the sunlight, huh? Can't wait to see what happens.
Thank you for reviewing!
I tried to keep little Buffy in character, and I had a kick of misusing the words while writing it!
I tried to keep little Buffy in character, and I had a kick of misusing the words while writing it!
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