Love's Bitch by Eowyn315
Chapter: The Date

05/20/2007 07:27 am
Poor Spike, the guy never gets a break. Now he has to watch her with someone else.
you show Buffy's conflicts really well. Very good characterization. And what makes the situation even more frustrating is that she could genuinly like the new guy, since he doesn't currently seem at all bad.
Thanks... yeah, I don't want Jacob to seem like a bad guy, because when Buffy ends up with Spike, it shouldn't be that he was just the lesser of two evils. Glad you're enjoying it.

Lou
04/08/2007 01:19 pm
Nice try at Miss Regular Girl, Buffy!
Well, she gets an A for effort...

04/06/2007 09:39 pm
He is loves bitch. Glad he showed and introduced himself. Let her squirm a bit. Wonder what Jacob's going think about the demons he's about to come face to face with. Hope Spike sent them, since they rarely show up at her place. Thanks for all the updates.
Yeah, Spike's trying to hold his own. That'd be funny if he sent the demons to mess with her date - except she'd be so pissed if she found out, it probably wouldn't be worth it for Spike.

Avalon
04/02/2007 01:42 pm
Yay!! Demons to the rescue!!!... Did that sound as weird to you as to me? :P
Haha, a little weird... but I think I know what you meant. ;)

04/02/2007 01:23 pm
From the last paragraph I can see *that* date isn't going to end well. Looking forward to more.
No... no, it's not. But that's what makes it fun. :)

Deb
04/02/2007 04:48 am
Ahhh...the life of a slayer. No rest for her here. Have fun!
Yeah, sometimes it just sucks to be Buffy... but at least she gets to hit things.

04/01/2007 10:43 pm
oh man, something tells me that as nice a guy as jacob seems to be, he's not gonna be able to handle the truth about buffy's life...or i don't know, maybe he *will* be able to handle it, and things will get a lot more complicated from here on out, who knows? but i'm dying to find out! :) great chapter, love :)
Glad you're enjoying it... won't tell you if you're right or not, but you'll find out soon enough. :)

Mark Evans
04/01/2007 08:10 pm
As you can see, I'm still reading, and I'm still loving this story. I loved the way Spike got in on the date. It was just enough butting in, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for the update!
Thanks! Glad you liked it!

04/01/2007 06:27 pm
Typical that demons would ruin an evening for Buffy. But I was kinda glad too, cause I don't like Buffy going out with someone. But the date was okay.
Haha... I can understand the ambivalence. I want Jacob to be likable, but I know most people will never root for him over Spike.

Thanks for the review!

smlcspike
04/01/2007 03:00 pm
Oh that is good, wonder how she will get out of this one.
Probably with lots of kicking and fighting, just like always. :) Can't say how Jacob will handle that, though.

04/01/2007 02:49 pm
knife’s edge on which their relationship so delicately balanced was always in danger of slipping and slicing either one of them to pieces. I loved this line. So insightful, especially for the situation as you've set it up.

Growling pack of demons, huh? There goes that good-night kiss - not to mention a second date. LOL
Thanks! Glad you liked that line. That was a last minute inspiration kind of line...

Thanks for the review!

04/01/2007 11:57 am
Silly Buffy having a cheap burger when prime steak is right there. Excellent update though.

Poor Spike, she KNOWS how he feels about her but just spaces out that he might be hurt to see her with another guy......poor baby.

Kathleen
I think she's so caught up in this "being friends with Spike" thing that she doesn't realize how hard it is to be friends with someone you're in love with, and watch them date someone else.

kim
04/01/2007 05:46 am
Wouldn't be the day after Halloween without a pack of demons! Oooo, boy....
Well, they spent all of Halloween not doing anything, so they were probably pretty bored...

Tamara
04/01/2007 05:26 am
It's pathetic how Buffy is letting her friends choose who she dates. They did that with Riley and look what a disaster he turned out to be.

it might betime for women to show interest in Spike and make Buffy jealous.
Oooh, jealous Buffy... I think you're trying to keep them apart even more than I am, lol!

BT_
04/01/2007 05:26 am
woops! Never can have a nice, normal date, can she? *chuckle*
No... Buffy's life does seem to avoid normal at all costs, doesn't it?

04/01/2007 05:17 am
I absolutely adored this chapter. I was almost ready to smack Buffy for hurting Spike's feelings, but when she kissed his cheek, I decided to hold back. I loved the way he horned in on her date, and the conversation between him and Jacob was hilarious. I especially liked the line "Still I think it'd be fun to meet them....eventually." :)

Keep up the good work!
Aww, glad you liked it. The date was pretty fun to write, with Spike popping up. You know he's not just gonna let that go by...

LadyYashka
04/01/2007 04:46 am
Can I hope that the pack of demons runs Jacob off and possibly knocks some sense into Buffy? Probably not going to happen is it? Damn...oh well. Great update. I loved how Spike handled her "date." I can't wait for more. :)
Haha, not quite what I had in mind, but you can certainly hope! Thanks for the review!