Work in Progress by Scarlet Ibis
Chapter: Wait and Bleed

alým
02/24/2008 12:25 pm
I want Riley to find out real soon just what a Slayer means…
But,In that case,Riley'll know that Spike didn't keep it to himself and Spike'll be in danger.
God,I wanna rip that literally bloody chip off of Spike's head!Then Riley'll find out just what the "William The Bloody" actually means,and I as sure as hell will sit back and enjoy the show...
So,I liked the chapter.:)
Ah yes, the chip...quite the problem, isn't it?  Well, you're already ahead of this chapter, so I think you kind of know what happens at this point ;)

02/20/2008 01:32 am
I’m thinking Riley’s gonna find out real soon…


Loved that last line, but I hope Spike gets a little revenge action of his own.
Well, feel kind of silly responding to this one, since you already know what happens ;)

07/19/2007 10:42 pm
Nice tender moment between Spike and Buffy. It's a relief to know she's behaving appropriatly. Your description of Spike's wincing and walking bow-legged gave me sympathy pains for him. Poor baby. Well, I'm on to chapter four. You've got me hooked, now.
Great to hear you're hooked. However, I trust you to let me know if you get over it, lol. A few have... What can I say?

And yeah, I wanted Buffy to see his pain- you know how she can be fond of living in denial.

05/25/2007 11:20 pm
Really liked your Riley characterization - both the part where he didn't intend to rape Spike, and the part where he's starting to think he likes it. Excellent conflict.
Thanks- yeah, I just couldn't have him straight up "bad." I could definitely see that (icky) potential within Riley, but he's still a boyscout at the same time, so I had to be true to that, sort of.

sirc
05/10/2007 09:43 pm
Well done :
Thanks :D

Lou
04/11/2007 12:49 am
Riley is seriously losing it. It'll be Buffy's turn next.
Yes, Riley is going off the deep end, kinda. The question is, will he be stopped? Hmm... Thanks for reviewing :D

04/04/2007 09:10 am
That's our Spike, thinking of her when he's the one that needs the attention. Riley just might have gone to the dark side if he got off reliving the rape, sick bastard. Unless Buffy can get the doctors to remove the chip, there isn't much she can do to keep Finn from hurting him again and again. Dawn doesn't need to get in his way either, no ones safe from him but Buffy and then he can always get the Initiative involved. Bet Xander's going to have to feel for the vamp too. Great work, thanks.
Spike's in pain, and yet, Spike's in love. What's man to do? And Riley doesn't see it as completely dark- cause hey, vampires aren't people, and therefore don't count, right? Yea... But trust, things will be done. What things, I can't say, but they will ;) Thanks for reviewing.

04/04/2007 08:11 am
love buffy's reaction. on one hand it seems out of character for her, but on the other, it is who buffy really is. thanks for the fine read.
Buffy's a white hat after all, and rape puts Riley on the side that's not, mostly. Of course he doesn't see it that way- vampires don't count, right? *sigh* Thanks for reviewing :D

04/04/2007 12:08 am
Yay! Support for Spike. Please continue this story soon.
Sorry for the wait. Spike shall be helped... Thanks for the review :D

04/02/2007 11:52 pm
Nice to see some Spike and Buffy bonding.
Thanks for reviewing :D Hope to see you next chapter, though Spike and Buffy are kinda MIA in it...

04/02/2007 06:07 pm
oh dear. I hope Dawn doesn't head out to the crypt this evening...I fear much badness if she does.
The idea of Giles coming home to a drunken Shayer and vampire passed out on his couch is rather funny...can't wait to see what you do.
Oh, little Dawnie... what will she do? And sorry- I just realized that Spike and Buffy are totally MIA in this chapter, but we do learn a few new things... Thanks for reviewing :D

pretty_in_fangs
04/02/2007 03:14 pm
I love how you're taking this story. What's happened to Spike is bad enough. If he'd had to be alone, and hide this from everyone as well, it'd be utterly heartwrenching.
Spike and alone are unmixy things in my brain :D I don't think I could stand to write that myself... thanks for reviewing.

04/02/2007 01:07 pm
Thank you Anya for the 'don't smell like Riley when you visit Spike' suggestion. Her years of experience as a demon were definitely underutilized in the show. I think Buffy's response to the incident is NOT going to be pleasant.
Well, someone had to tell Buffy- I think they all would've been sort of clueless in that regard. Thanks for reviewing, and hope to see you next chapter :D

04/02/2007 07:17 am
Yay Riley's going to get his butt served to him on a plater. I can't beleive he thinks he can go back to Spike if Buffy tells him no, grrrr. Jerk. Need more like now.
The last line in the last chapter (for Riley) was actually in ref to those soldier boys in town. However, yes, Riley will eventually go gunning for Spike again... Sorry. But hope you like the direction it's going in- if not, let me know :D

Great chapter plz update soon
04/02/2007 04:58 am
Thanks so much :D

Tamara
04/02/2007 02:29 am
One thing I hated about Into the Woods was that Riley and Buffy both blame Spike for her finding out. Whatever his reason for showing her , would Buffy really prefer to be ignorant? Even the guy who write the synopsis for the episode describes it as Spike interfering in thier relationship.
And here iley is once again refusing responsibility for his own actions.


Anya and Giles are again stellar in the chapter. Trust Anya to figure out that he would be able to smell Riley on Buffy .

Damn, I had this whole response written out, and something made it delete... anyway, Riley needed help, and Buffy had to know. I think that writer might've been sniffing glue or something... I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far, and I hope you enjoy this next bit. Thanks for reviewing :D

04/02/2007 02:24 am
Oh, I hope Riley doesn't get a chance to come near Spike again. Of course, if Spike has room to maneuver, he'll just out-speed the bastard and still be safe.

Nice to see Buffy trying to be as considerate as possible.
Well, I could tell you, but that would just be wrong ;) I'll just say we haven't seen the last of Finn. Thanks for reviewing :D

Typerbabe57
04/02/2007 12:11 am
What's really different about this fic is that Spike is actually getting some support from the Scoobies! That's really refreshing and a nice change of pace. Great story! Can't wait to see how Buffy handles Riley!
In a situation such as this, and considering it's before "Crush," I dont' see why they wouldn't be inclined to help him. Riley is the "bad and evil" in this scenario after all. However, I haven't gotten to Xander yet... not saying that he'll react horribly, but just pointing it out ;) Thanks for reviewing.

04/02/2007 12:08 am
Yes, Riley should find out soon. Wonder who his backup plan is? We'll see I'm sure. Seems Riley enjoyed it more than he wants to admit.

Kathleen
Oh Riley... what will I do with him? Oh, the backup plan- I should've clarified that I was referring to those soldier guys who are in town. And yes- Riley absolutely did, as you will find out later... Thanks for reviewing :D

04/01/2007 10:46 pm
Another good chapter. I totally buy your characterization of Riley. In my own head, Riley's natural reaction to the vamp whore reveal by Spike would have been to stake him. With a wooden stake. Course, that would sort of end the story for Spike, so we can't do that. But this makes more sense than the plastic stake thing.

Like Anya's sensitivity about the vampiric sense of smell.

I like this fic a lot! But to finish the point from my last comment. I totally agree that being raped by Riley is about as catastrophic as it gets for Spike. Really disgusting and humiliating in all the ways that you clearly understand. It's just that I don't think this is Spike's first experience of being raped by a contemptible bastard. See, to my way of thinking, William was a small, pretty boy in Victorian England. And he went to public (i.e. private in the American sense) school. And I don't see how he could have escaped being raped by bastards. In fact, I suspect it happened often. And the only thing that would make the humiliation worse would be to show that he is humiliated. I doubt William was even willing to let it show. And since the whole point of inventing Spike is to not be vulnerable William, I think the impulse to NOT show it would be that much stronger. So in my head, the very last thing Spike would ever do is let others know about this. But that would make it hard to write the fic you are writing. And the moves you are making opens up interesting doors. And that's what makes fanfic so fun! Thanks!!
Yay (claps hands)!!

You know, I just saw "Sleepers" this past week for the first time... I never considered that William was abused. Beat up probably, sure. But the other never crossed my mind. And true, Spike is the facade that protects William. But even Spike can't always be successful in that (alley scene in "Fool for Love," and though no one was there to see him cry, it was still evident how "sensitive" Spike could be, as Harmony pointed out. Thanks for reviewing, and please let me know if I pass or fail in this next chapter ;)

Tristan Charron
04/01/2007 10:44 pm
Wow, I just found this story and am very glad I did. It's incredibly amazing, especially the intensity you've written with! The first chapter was exquisitely gruesome and gah, totally had me tearing up! :) Very worried about where Riley's going and I hope Buffy and Spike totally kick his creepy rapist arse!! Great chapter, can't wait for more.
I'm glad that the first chapter effected you so, and yet, sorry cause I don't like to make people sad. Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the rest ;)

04/01/2007 10:34 pm
A shredded spleed would be just what the doctor ordered. Hand it to 'im, Buffy!! Avenge your Spike.

Excellent, thoughtful chapter.
Hmm... who will avenge Spike? Who will comfort him? Too many questions... Glad you liked the chapter :D

04/01/2007 10:17 pm
great chapter, love how you're having buffy react in this...she's not just accepting it easily and going directly onto the warpath, but she is allowing herself to believe spike, instead of automatically taking riley's side...loved it, pet, looking forward to more :)
If she automatically took Riley's side, I'd have to punch my own face, and that wouldn't be very pleasant... Thanks for the review :D